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Carved
by Kimmy Van Kooten → (All Poetry by Kimmy Van Kooten)
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Ha! If it weren't for Paul, God only knows where this one would of had me going...tee hee! :0


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I was in my other world, far beyond imagine
and there I sat over rumpled grass, atop on gingham linen
My dress is subtle, white lace in lavender, with a picnic placed with glee . . .
Under a Weeping Willow, pray, a carving on my tree . . .

"Wait for me . . . , "it said out loud . . . the bark, in gutted routs
for years I felt, I took me here, to sit and wait him out . . .
I picture him, rigid, tall and thin, with eyes beyond my gaze . . .
Sun tint skin with a pearly grin, a man, without a doubt!

He’d lift me high, and twirl me about, ‘till I was dizzy, mad in love
He’d kiss me softly, on down, on one. . . with all he ever, kneed
"Will you marry me, you, agnizing sweet, who, in knowing, I would come
"Will you marry me, my princess dear...I’ve waited just as long!"

One by one, under a blue sky and sun
Clear skies of cleansing, thoughts
The one I had, just right before all that..
I was thinking. . . damn, I should of thought some other thoughts!

‘Cuz my husband, now, just came in the room and read this poem, at lest...
He said it wasn’t right of me to think, such loftiness!
"I’m your picnic, I’m your prince, your just trying to piss me off...
Get that head from out those clouds, or I carve,
"Don’t wait for me, I’m Gone. . . !"


 

Copyright 2007
Kimmy Van Kooten

 

 

 
 
 


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 Reviews of "Carved"
Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on February 28, 2008
...to soar with cutting brilliance...far above a tree of tears...is to at times...make love to the clouds...and yet return to one...of held prescence...we again...wish for other days beneath branches.
wonderful thoughts and lifted visions are penned here Kimmy...
John

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on October 20, 2007
You are so Adorable! You have a truly Happy Ever After Life, You Sweet Princess, truly have found yore Prince Charming! You make a GOLDEN COUPLE! LOVE YA! SC

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 11, 2007
The mind can take us anywhere.

Ron

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 10, 2007
One say, hear, write, ...under a weeping willow and romance appears like Tinkerbell with sweet, gentle thoughts...
Georg

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on October 10, 2007
Iinteresting, to say the least.

Walt

Reviewed on October 9, 2007
Kimmy,

Excellent write; enjoyed!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on October 9, 2007
Well done, Kimmy; well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 9, 2007
Ahh Kimmy,whimsical but also romantic and hubby Paul or not we are all entitled to our little fantasies of magic now and then just to reemind us that love is grand.

Fee


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