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Holding the Line

by Tom Kitt — Read all 95 poems by Tom Kitt


In the following poem the man wanted to do the right thing but lacked information. He was off-center. It is not until we learn who we are that we may properly center our actions in the world. In the meantime we will suffer every line of hope just as lines of coke. Addicts one and all.

Tuesday, February 13, 2007


Poem Artwork
Holding the Line

Said he sees the faces every night
64 kills confirmed - proud?
Vietnam vet
Met him doing laundry - just he & I
Showed me how to use the dryer
Discharged on mental disability
Became a biker king
Married - 3 kids
Grew fat - grey
Sporting a ponytail
Heavy attitude tempered with doubt
Hard to defend the line set down
I asked him about the 64
"They ain't goin' to cause trouble to nobody no more"
Said his superior told him to shoot
A boy foraging for cans in a garbage dump
Refused under threat of court-martial
He held fast
A few days later
Three buddies died in an explosion set by the boy
Should he have shot the boy?
He still wonders
Where to hold the line
I asked him if he'd do it all again
Hesitated, then said, yes!
I asked, why?
Said there was a military tradition in his family
A place to hold the line
Any excuse to feed the beast
Any excuse to be defined
64 dead boys - madness!

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Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on February 22, 2007
Our world is in a sad condition, has been for a long time and I don't see it getting any better. God Bless, Holly

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 19, 2007
A lot of our world is "mad" and in chaos, Tom. Well done. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed on February 14, 2007

Outstanding in every emotion and depicting. "Holding the Line" glows as a poetic jewel.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on February 13, 2007
Well portrayed, both the images of the addicted warrior, and his philosophy. My grandfather was such a warrior, and I have met a few Hell's Angels (and one homeless man) who shared the background. The Iwo Jima pic does fit, and that's hard. Good writing, Tom!

Ted

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on February 13, 2007
Decisions no one person should be forced to make. Pray for all in our military. Good write.
Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on February 13, 2007
heavy...war makes people do strange things...or does it give some the opportunity too..i don't know but i enjoyed the read


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