Eileen, the perfect description of Love's Permeating Splendour!
Be still, my heart! The graphic and the soothing music displaces every drop of stress and worldweariness, with the profundity of sharing a Genuine Love...an altogether Exquisite compositon.
I thinkk these short, rhyming verses are great. You managed to give the reader the premise of your poem in easy to read, easier to understand words. Very nice.
The meter of this rhyme is lovely - quite hypnotic. I read it with and without the music but think the entire composition really uplifting. It's good to drift and then stop for a while .... what a nice romantic interlude for a Monday...love Panda :)
Zara’s Bois:
When the powers-that-be make the decision to return a selfish party-girl to Earth on three missions of redemption, can romance and mayhem be far behind? One hot and trendy gay nightclub, two bickering angels and three unlikely p
Nobleman's son, Todd Ramble, returns home after years abroad and finds himself falling in love with his step-sister, who was now a grown woman. Unfortunately their love is brutally challenged by his tyrannical father.
Love, B&R
Splendid write Sis!!
Love Tinka
Be still, my heart! The graphic and the soothing music displaces every drop of stress and worldweariness, with the profundity of sharing a Genuine Love...an altogether Exquisite compositon.
Love, Rhonda
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
I agree with Ed and Rufuz below..
Someone is a lucky boy..
Great flow and meter here..
Harmony
Peter
and sweeps the reader along. So very beautiful!
Myrna
Be well,
Penny
This is beauty in the gentleness of true love.
Susan