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The Struggle
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It was so dark, the dawn had not yet
arisen~I was on a journey to the unknown
I felt like I was walking through a wall of
taffy~ I kept getting pulled back~ stuck
here and there~making very little
forward progress

Life's roads have so many twists and turns
we never know what we're getting ourselves
into~but we go on nevertheless

I continued to struggle forward not allowing
anything to impede my determination~soon
I saw rays of the sun appearing in it's lovely
apricot glow, against the aqua sky with puffy
marshmallow clouds drifting by

What a beautiful sight after the tunnel of dark
night~ I still didn't know where I was going
I just kept trying to move forward~ hoping to
eventually arrive at my destination



My thoughts questioned this journey and its
purpose~ and in the process I realized that
what I was doing wasn't anything different
than usual,laboring daily onward and upward
always reaching towards the heavens


ET

 


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 Reviews of "The Struggle"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 28, 2008
We struggle from the womb and the rest of our lives until the peace of death. Only some of us don't know it.

Ron

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on January 27, 2008
In life we have to continue to move forward, hoping and praying for the best to be ahead, sometimes it is not for us to question but just to believe. Thank you Eileen for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on January 27, 2008
Your writings on lifes struggles to stay positive and moving always forward in the light are so touching and inspirational, Eileen...
love, Carole~

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 27, 2008
A appropriate and effective write, Eileen. Thank you for sharing your philosophical perspective. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on January 27, 2008
strong imagery. cheers

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on January 27, 2008
You journey toward your destiny, will always be filled with struggles, obstacles and pain, but if you walk in the light of your higher power you will feel joy and peace and the strength to keep on moving forward.
Beautiful poem ET

Peace, love, and glorious light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on January 27, 2008
This road called life does offer us various roads, and we don't always make the right choice but we often learn from the roads we take making us stronger. Well done my friend a very profound write!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 27, 2008
Life's roads have so many twists and turns
we never know what we're getting ourselves
into~but we go on nevertheless

At least we should try, as you always obviously do, Tiger Lily.

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on January 27, 2008
A delicate sharing of the struggle to live and survive....M

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 27, 2008
Like walking all night with feet dragging in the mud, discovering the cleansing river's water just ahead...
Very good soul trip.

Georg

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
The contemplative life with the active. Many spiritual truths weaved throughout...

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Beautiful photo and poem E T. We struggle because it is our mission to seek the path of greatest obstacles. And having stiil made the objective are rewarded with great satisfaction. Jon michael Willey

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
i enjoyed the truth in this--not knowing anything ahead of us we do continue forward

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Keep the faith
x0x0x
Ron

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Sounds like the dreams I often have
Always seems like the more I go forward
The harder it gets,I often do meditate to relax
My mind and my soul!!
Beautifully written you piece inspired
Me to think positive!!
Thank You Eileen!!
Peace Love and hugssss.....Morning Star

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
this has a dream like quality or someone trying to meditate, when the mind just won't calm...surrender and flow was a good solution...it always leads where its supposed to :)

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
This is a video of words putting a masterpiece of the movement of time in a day. Out-Standing Elieen. I love the artist in you!
Blessings and love,
Susan

Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Sounds like the dream I had last night, I feel the darkness the fear that you portray, and the courage to move through it, into the light,it is a constant struggle to move through that taffy, well done, Blessings! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed on January 26, 2008
great piece of courage poetry Eileen, that's all we can do is keep on reaching for the light, praying and doing what it takes. love

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
...positive pen...the process of black and white...remembered in living color...
excellent Eileen...
John

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Loved this excellent piece Eileen
Love & peace be with you

Eilliam

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
This reminded me of a train ride
Looking ahead seeing a tunnel
Knowing the train wasn't going to stop
Had to go through!!
And once inside dark and eerie
Couldn't wait to see the light ahead.
Going back was different, I had experienced it before.
So . . . .'onward and upward'. . . . .really enjoyed!
Doug

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Determination is my favorite word, Eileen. You set such a powerful mood here and the picture softly underlines the meaning.
Lovely!
Becca~

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Eileen, God's ray of light shown upon you to allow you to know HE would never leave you out in the dark alone. This gave me chills! Life can toss us some punches but we have to continue to step forward and live life as we can.

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
:)

Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Eileen,

After having just awakened from a nap LOL, I felt like the line, "I felt like I was walking through a wall of taffy..." LOL But! I love how determined you are not to get stuck in the muck, always pressing on. Arisen, always looking up and ahead. Well done, my new favorite of yours!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Wonderful write, Eileen; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
I can picture this journey with all its mystery and beauty,daily all of us experience the T.E.A. of people going through their own day. The struggle often can turn to peace just by looking closer at the beauty around them.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
Dreams are mirrors at time and reflect our desires as well as our fears . . . This one was one of the bedrock kind . . . Nice . . .


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