Lisette's Journal Part 6 (poem) by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Mark Chevalier (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2008

Not dead...but yet dead. Vividly full of emotion and pain.

Mark

Reviewed on October 17, 2008

You paint her anguish beautifully:)
Sheila

Reviewed on October 15, 2008

Possible one of the best description of my dungeons, although my hair isn't black but yes my eyes are phosphorous sulphur yellow and my smile telling what I will do after Daddy goes home........

G (Gargoyle, Gargantuan, Ghoul, take you pick)

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 14, 2008

excellent horror poem ... quite a scary sonnet ...

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on October 14, 2008

LaBelle,
the images are so consistent, throbbing like an ache, the sense of fear and horror excellently conveyed.
John

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on October 14, 2008

What ambiance. What creepiness. What a smash of a poem and continued story. Poor Lisette. No resting in peace for her. Excellent. Liz

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on October 14, 2008

Oh my goodness, how I could feel all the anguish and uncertainty in this tale. Does this mean that even vampires have second thoughts and really just want to be human after all....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 14, 2008

Wow this is fantastic Belle, I could feel every line and it is so ready to be a screenplay...well done my ghoulish fiend er ah friend
Fee

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on October 14, 2008

La Belle this one sent chills through my spine it�s very scary
And frightening!!
Awesome piece
Peace Love and Light�.Morning Star

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on October 14, 2008

This is so well written, Belle, that I might try to read it again,
when I stop trembling. -gene.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on October 14, 2008

A fantastic piece but I don't do scary very well. I do believe you all want to see how many lights it will take to turn on before I can sleep at nights, lol. Thank you for sharing, I Think.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on October 14, 2008

La Belle,

Chilled me to the bone . . . perfect!

Best wishes,

Lance

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on October 14, 2008

I think you guys are tryin to give my cranky little heart a heart attack. La Belle this was scary and frightening to the core. Well done my friend...Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 14, 2008

Oh, my, La Belle, this is so good it's scary. Scarygood. InDEED. More, please!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 14, 2008

Chillingly good write, Belle; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D