Lisette's Journal Part 8 (poem) by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 17, 2008

Marvelous, Belle. -gene.

Reviewed on October 17, 2008

As she goes from one life to another, she is not unlike the rest of us. Something about the vampire life seems so romantic...the immortality, the long-lasting youth. Imaginative write.
Sheila

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on October 16, 2008

LaBelle,
the journal becomes darker and eerier here and is even more compelling.
John

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on October 16, 2008

Reminds me of Josette from "Dark Shadows" and how Barnabas ached for her through centuries as he was a vampire. Each chapter better than the last yet it truly captures the best and worst of us all....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on October 16, 2008

Ok La Belle I am for sure being cremated when I leave this wonderful world, no changing my mind on the one. Excellent as usual dear. thank you for sharing.

Newfie hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on October 16, 2008

Exquisite and delightful read (if you are a vampire) if not, what a waste of beautiful flesh put in the dark!

Georg

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on October 16, 2008

Well ya got me with this one La Belle. You finally did it with my greatest fear, that's why I'm being cremated. No hole for me, the older I get the more claustrophobic I get. Now all I'm thinking of is this terrifying write. You are a terrific writer to bring such paranoia out of us. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 16, 2008

What Karla said. Ditto!! *Brrrrrr* How come it got cold in here all of a sudden?? LOL GREAT write; brava, Belle! (You ought to see the look on Karla's face!! LOL)

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 16, 2008

OH this is a claustrophobic's nightmare ... to be buried and alive!! Unable to move ... unable to scream ... *shudders* Well done, La Belle, more, please. I think ... after this one, don't know, my heart 'bout jumped out of my chest!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Yeah, more. I'm *gulp* game!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 16, 2008

Just gets better and better or should I say eerier and eerier. Well done and love the picture.

hugs
fEe

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman

Reviewed on October 16, 2008

:Oo

:Ooooo

brilliant Belle :o
:)

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on October 16, 2008

Ecellent write, Belle! I think I must have been away for I have missed the first 7 parts of this story. Have to catch up with everyone's writing soon.

Love,

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on October 16, 2008

Quite the story Belle. Excellent work my friend.