Forbidden (poem) by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 2, 2010

Ahhh yes, yea goddess. There is something special about the dark and fireside, that sets the soul ablaze. Even outside bed dancing, just two friends chatting has a special feel.

Tightly worded penn. And my kinda clothes. but as a chat up line, offering a new set of clothes, ones face can get pretty darn bruised.

Reviewed by Roger Ochs

Reviewed on June 2, 2010

Fantastic! Soft, sensual, sexy, superb & sublime.

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on June 1, 2010

You are such a poetess! "foreplay of words, blushed cheeks, watered garden" is so powerful, and it's just a great poem!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on June 1, 2010

Oh boy, the magic, the memories.
Perfection.

John

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 1, 2010

Forbidden memories to fire winter nights...captures the essence of your beutiful poem so well...for just because a love is forbidden does not make it any less real or any less passionate.
fee

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on June 1, 2010

beautiful!

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on June 1, 2010

BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on June 1, 2010

If red is the color of passion then...my world is already in fire!

Georg

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on June 1, 2010

Beautifully done, Belle.

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill

Reviewed on May 31, 2010

Very sensual and romantic. Good words!

Peace,
Dayvid

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on May 31, 2010

Belle, this art of yours. This poetic rendering. I will hang it high so as to view whenever I wish. Sensual, gripping the imagination and dancing with verbal ecstasy. Your choice of descriptors unique, and turn me pea green with envy. "discarded leather, lace - touch and taste". Sensuous, Belle, sensuous. May peace and love be always with you my dear friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on May 31, 2010

SO VERY WELL DONE...A VIVIDLY CLEAR PORTRAIT IS DRAWN WITH WELL CHOSEN PHRASES THAT HAS PRODUCED DYNAMIC IMAGERY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS, LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

Reviewed on May 31, 2010

Lovely sentiments as always, LaBelle. Serene yet erotic too.

GOD BLESS YOU ALWAYS
TONY

Reviewed by Gentle Man (Reader)

Reviewed on May 31, 2010

Your words always land so gently on my heart! Wonderfully written!

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on May 31, 2010

'foreplay of words'...that I will steal, Belle!
the images state with such certainty and deliberate control, no padding or wastage, and sit elegantly sensual in this reader's mind.

John