the proverbial carrot on a stick Belle, begging for the next segment in the hope of a great revelation - mystery is a cape of enhancement
worn with just the right touch of arrogance - let the pen drip endlessly with intrigue - I wish you love and peace my dear friend - Jon Michael
finely articulated and with the right
telling detail, the picture is excellently
built..intrigue, desire, uncertainty
and imagination..they're all here;
roll on, part 2;
strong writing, Belle
You've truly made me miss our Good Old Days of Spookfest Offerings here on A.D., and you've truly made me wish for the Response that would have surely come from devilish old Brother Georg Edvard.
Love that last line, but liked the poem completely. You say you have no idea where this is going, but since this is Part 1 I know you will be back again with this woman with the peridot eyes. I await eagerly.
Tasked by his Goddess to find, relocate, and then quicken, the last three Heart Tree gem-seeds, Vanx the bard, and his motley crew of adventurers, set out to do just that.
Tasked by his Goddess to find, relocate, and then quicken, the last three Heart Tree gem-seeds, Vanx the bard, and his motley crew of adventurers, set out to do just that.
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(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D
worn with just the right touch of arrogance - let the pen drip endlessly with intrigue - I wish you love and peace my dear friend - Jon Michael
telling detail, the picture is excellently
built..intrigue, desire, uncertainty
and imagination..they're all here;
roll on, part 2;
strong writing, Belle
john
fee
setting the erie pace *La Belle*
Lady Vivian
I miss Georg so much at this time of year!
Peace, love and light,
Amber
Deborah
looking for the follow-up
Love and Light
Lily
Regis
budd
Ron
To entrance this mysterious peridot of eyes and cunning
movement like a cat.. Music of a harpsicord mesmerizes
the scene.. Excellent write, awaiting more you shall give..a mystery of the sailing ship necklace !!
Lady Mary Ann