Kiss me till I'm breathless, give me your warmth, so I no longer shake,
Turn my frozen body into flowing lava, make me explode with passion quakes.
Take the numbness from my body, let me feel passion's flame,
Take possession of me, make me chant your name.
Claim me, what no other man has claimed before,
Take me higher, open Paradise's door,
Make my body glow to your touch,
Make me your woman, the one you adore so much.
I want you deep inside me, I want the joy of being one,
I want to experience animal lust, to feel passion overrun.
Let your body consume me,give me wings to fly,
Make me shout with joy, make me moan and sigh!
Make my womanflower glisten with wanton dew,
Make me your woman, I want to belong to you!
Awaken this sleeping maiden from her trance,
Make my body throb, make passion dance.
Beautiful One, I have waited a lifetime for you to come along,
Awaken my body and teach me your love song.
WOW!!!!!k I Love this! I truly love every line!
YOUR Flowwwwwwwwwww is filled with much Passion SC!
This I will treasure! What a gem!
WArmly, Warrior Spirit Lady Sheeeoox
Be SAFE!
STay POsitive!
This is red hot filled with Passion and TRue Love!
Reviewed by little blue angel (Reader)
Reviewed on May 29, 2007
Such a beautiful poem.love ya blue angel
Reviewed by Michael LaSalle (Reader)
Reviewed on May 29, 2007
Delicious! hot, desirous, sensual, erotic tenderness, sweet, and O so very hypnotic Pattiann, you have the ability to cast a spell over the reader, and entrance the heart with pure yearning blissfulness! Passionate beyond, you never cease to amaze me!
Reviewed by Lydia Shutter (Reader)
Reviewed on May 29, 2007
Tell the man what you want, PA, don't be shy! :) So passionate and romantic. Great poem. Lydi**
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 29, 2007
Wow! OK, I will do my best...
Your sexy write really flows with
desire here.
Love, love, love....
Ron
I wrote this novel several years ago, I self published and never had it to sell. I have decided to rewrite it and hope to get it published within a few months for people to be able to buy. I had a few copies and gave them to a few family members and
YOUR Flowwwwwwwwwww is filled with much Passion SC!
This I will treasure! What a gem!
WArmly, Warrior Spirit Lady Sheeeoox
Be SAFE!
STay POsitive!
This is red hot filled with Passion and TRue Love!
Your sexy write really flows with
desire here.
Love, love, love....
Ron
This is stunning
TY
Ch'erie
Reindeer
Because I am a comedian.
Ha, Ha,......Ha?
Georg