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Defeat
by Southern Comfort → (All Poetry by Southern Comfort)
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My arms are empty and so is my bed,
You left saying nothing, when more should have been said.
No kiss was placed on my lips in farewell,
Just a cold stare that couldn't be melted by Hell.
You left me to wonder what went wrong,
With a love I thought was so strong.
You gave pretend feelings from a lying heart,
You gave pain and tears as dreams fell apart.
Realizatiion dawned, wounding my soul,
Over making you love me, I had no control.
Your vowed love was false, but mine was true ,
You never loved me, but I loved you.
So very painful are affairs of the heart,
When impaled by betrayal's dart.
I couldn't make you love and I don't know why,
We ended in defeat because you wouldn't try.

Music: I Can't Make You Love Me

For All Who Read And Comment, THANK-YOU 

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 Reviews of "Defeat"
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on July 9, 2008
Don't let me catch you with none of those tears, you hear me?! better go and file sharp those claws of yours and get even!

Georg

Reviewed on June 29, 2008
This is beautifully and sadly felt and said SC!
I love your style STILL!
Such sadness weeps!
Reach for the sun - let it brighten your day!
Love and Warmest Blessings, Warrior Purple Passion Sheeexoooo

STay Positive!
This songs evokes much of heart!

Reviewed by Silent Dream
Reviewed on June 25, 2008
A heartbreaking piece
Sending ((Hugs and LOve)) ~SilentDream

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 25, 2008
Sad write SC but one that has a very good lesson in it. To try and force someone to stay who doesn't love you or even feel they don't love you will always only end up in more pain in the long run.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed on June 25, 2008
Sometimes we just have to write the clouds away and when the cold clouds begin to scatter the warm sunshine will peak through again. Love you Sweetie, I respect your pain.

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on June 25, 2008
I, for one, will always love you and your verse. Sweet southern belle.

Walt

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on June 25, 2008
S.C.,

Cupid isn't the only one shooting arrows or throwing darts these days my friend. We just pray that the arrows will land but the darts will miss. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.


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