The She Bitch (poem) by Ann Scarborough on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on September 23, 2007

The succubus is BACK, I wrote of her too, in two of my intense poems!
This Bitch has an enemy "Karma" and her day will come~
This poem say it all!
Men BEWARE! She has unwavering patience to destroy ~
My boyfr. had an Ex like her, A taker - He had time to get OUT!
and is glad he did, 5 yrs for us in passion and still going STRONG.
Glad you shared this!
Much love and Warmer hugs, WArrior Lady Sheeeoox

STay Positive! Happy and STrong!

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Reviewed on August 30, 2007

I agree with Karla,the picture you paint is fantastic I can relate, but I have a powerful ally by the name of Jasmin, and as Walt said, Karma has a way of working itself out. Very powerful thanks! Bless YOU!
Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by G Yale (Reader)

Reviewed on August 29, 2007

Good rhyming, but I just can't make the last line work. It seems a different rythmn from the other lines.

Reviewed by Michael Guy

Reviewed on August 26, 2007

what a nice tightly composed series of couplets with a good message. Good composing: I wonder who the 'poor blighter is?' sometimes it's best to never marry!?

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on August 13, 2007

I've known one in my lifetime...not many. The moment one looks like she wishes to take that road...I close my eyes and exit, stage right. Great writing, Ann. Keep this up.

Reviewed by Sandra Ferrara Gentry

Reviewed on August 11, 2007

my husband has an ex like that...Oops! You seemed to nail it! I think you did a wonderful job!

Sandra:)

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on August 9, 2007

And we are left with the pieces. I'll never really understand that kind of nature. Good write. Lady J

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 9, 2007

A banshee, Katrina, or an ex? Wow, strong images, powerful emotions: remind me to stay out of her way! Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Jean Pike

Reviewed on August 9, 2007

Excellent poem!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on August 9, 2007

Strong words indeed but yes I had one of those one time until we divorced and she tried to make my life miserable, forunately I am a survivor and went on to love again, she went on to be just a pathetic she bitch as your name implies but all I feel for her now when I look back is sorry for the waste.

Fee

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on August 9, 2007

There will always be a fateful meeting between Karma and she-bitches. In the meantime God will send other hearts and arms to heal the damage. A powerful vent Ann and well deserved I'm sure.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on August 8, 2007

My po0r uncle is married to one..
She just doesn't leave him alone...

Reviewed by Southern Comfort

Reviewed on August 8, 2007

Darlin Ann! You won't believe but I started a poem dealin with this topic, but now I shall trash mine, for you said what I wanted to say so perfectly! A lovin and carin poem, Sweet Angel! LOVE YOU! SC

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on August 8, 2007

Karma has a way of working in it's own way...
Love,
Walt