no words were necessary between us, no touch or contrivances required then when at first sight we saw in the other the best of who we are.
it was like a song whose strange melody, captivating, culminated in crescendo and stirred our souls in ways we had never imagined.
your eyes became mirrors reflecting who I was meant to be; still waters beckoned me to dive deep into future unknown. funny, I never felt so sure, so certain.
you ask me do I believe in love that one can recognize, read in a face at first encounter? do I believe in love at first sight? look at me, love… look and never ask again.
A splendid poem Dawn, excellent reply to a challenging challenge. Wonderfully done.
Allen
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2004
Dawn,
i love the pic so excellent.
"it was like
a song whose
strange melody,
captivating,
culminated
in crescendo
and stirred
our souls
in ways we
had never
imagined.
your eyes
became mirrors
reflecting who
I was meant to be;
still waters
beckoned me
to dive deep
into future unknown.
funny, I never
felt so sure,
so certain."
I love the take on this challenge too.
excelelnt poem...
Nobleman's son, Todd Ramble, returns home after years abroad and finds himself falling in love with his step-sister, who was now a grown woman. Unfortunately their love is brutally challenged by his tyrannical father.
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Wonderful heart.
John
do I believe in
love at first sight?
look at me, love…
look and never
ask again.
Reindeer
Love how you end it Dawn! Ty, Dani
Allen
i love the pic so excellent.
"it was like
a song whose
strange melody,
captivating,
culminated
in crescendo
and stirred
our souls
in ways we
had never
imagined.
your eyes
became mirrors
reflecting who
I was meant to be;
still waters
beckoned me
to dive deep
into future unknown.
funny, I never
felt so sure,
so certain."
I love the take on this challenge too.
excelelnt poem...
Lady Peg