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transit
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Venus floats in the western heavens
the waning moon lingers in the Pleiades
Mars shines bright and is growing in light
while Jupiter makes its move toward Venus
 


Experience of discovery
understanding true beauty
evolutionary path to wholeness
where sacred pleasure and intimacy
is more than a form of art 
 


Restless releasings
intuitive expression
we are learning to savor fullness
gently and lovingly we transit
 


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Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 27, 2005
It's obvious that you are farther along on the "journey" than I am if you can share such insight and beauty. Thank you for the gift. Love and peace.

Regis

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 27, 2005
WOW!! This sings to the soul and the senses in terms of its concepts as much as for the mystical and wonderful vistas you open up to us here, Debby. Am keeping this for sure - thank you. A total and perfectly wrought cornucopia that says all about our highest aspirations and our deepest longings. The lightness in this write is so ethereal that it makes it seem almost of the breath of heavenly bodies itself! Isn't Jupiter also dubbed "Joy-bringer"? What use is discovery if it is not to be experienced at some deep level, other than the purely cerebral? Just wonderful. Bless you. Kate xx

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 26, 2005
excellent poem! is experience discovery or appreciation of what we find while in transit?

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 26, 2005
Like taking a magical ride with you to the heavens and back.
Felix

Reviewed on August 26, 2005
Lovely, this is quite beautiful,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 26, 2005
Quite a captivating transit, Debby.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2005
Kinda lost me with this one. Just couldn't see and understand the correlation of the cosmos in relationship to our "evolutionary path to wholeness." Even so, I liked the poetical expertise you showed as you wrote it. Just because I didn't "get" it doesn't mean that it isn't "get-able." I am sure everyone but me did understand it.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 26, 2005
A fine piece you penned here Debby!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on August 25, 2005
Restless releasings
intuitive expression
we are learning to savor fullness
gently and lovingly we transit <------ Deep Debb- Feels just like this too- Sometimes, it hurts to bad- Feeling the universe working through you while in transit-
Awesome Poem today- Warmly&Peacefully,Sheee


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