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loose change
by Debby Rosenberg → (All Poetry by Debby Rosenberg)
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top photo is of the tumblebrush which arrived with its dozen cousins around the yard....


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cool nights blushed the more delicate leaves

the daylight winds blew more than a breeze

delivering the tumbles of new season

 

unfinished thoughts dangled mid air

light years away I blinked

awaiting another awareness

 

seekers sat upon their alters

twisting the verbs introspective

some gave voice and sang more loudly

some held modifiers noiseless

 

I rarely give gentle

my way beyond summer  

grasping the moment of autumn’s loose change

 

laying on my back

looking up at the cloud line

somewhere between ceaseless and now

 

 

~summer and autumn are dancing~

 

 


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 Reviews of "loose change"
Reviewed by Stephanie Webb
Reviewed on October 29, 2009
I love this!

Steph

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 20, 2009
Clearly an inspired write, Debby. It is very apt and timely. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on September 17, 2009
It is a sweet dance from one season to the other. Nicely written.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on September 15, 2009
"unfinished thoughts dangled mid air"; "somewhere between ceaseless and now" - what terrific lines! Consciousness evolving with you on its cusp - leading the way to expansion in every direction.




Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 15, 2009
Summer and autumn were dancing! Love it! love this poem and the pics with it altogether a lovely feeling! Thanks Debby!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 15, 2009
i was just lying on my back thinking similar things but not so poetically ... nice!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 14, 2009
This is indeed one of my favorite seasons as I am not fond of the heat I love the cool breezes of the fall. Nice write indeed Debby...well done.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on September 14, 2009
How beautifully you describe the changing of the guard...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on September 14, 2009
such a lovely write! love the photos as well

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on September 14, 2009
"...unfinished thoughts dangling in mid air..." how a gentle way to say it and have the rest of the poem dangling from it!
Excellent!!!

Georg



Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on September 14, 2009
Great poem Debby.This is beautiful.I enjoy reading it,take care

EDWIN

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on September 14, 2009
Nicely written, Debby.

Reviewed on September 14, 2009
Sweet! Summer will move over after the dance


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