Grasping the fawning breeze
over the servility
of her omniscient abandons
announcing visions arrive
delivering the canvas of love
caressive as a silent moment
whispering nuances
they embrace without questions
claimed in their avowals devotion
offering into their seductive bounty
of sensual expression
their lips melding as one
into impassioning desires
sultry and erogenously tasting intimacy
they dance on moments climactic essence
whispery like butterflies across the sky
shooting as star stuck comets colliding
waltzing to their orgasmic love songs
moaning naked with core emotions…
Very hot sultry dance! I'd like a partner for an orgasmic love song! Romantic, erotic, and sweet!! Love, ~Chessly
Reviewed by David cox (Reader)
Reviewed on January 12, 2011
what an evocotive piece, you have such a mastery of words vickie.
whispery like butterflies across the sky.
this line is just beautiful.
thanks for all your work vickie.
amazing.
dave
Music can do that, Vickie, music of the soul but of and for the body, too, for the entire condition and experience..."whispery like butterflies across the sky"...ah yes, one of those moments od pure magic.
Filled with the love that fills a heart for a lifetime and beyond, magnificent loving piece...
Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on January 11, 2011
I've finally figured it out... it took me long enough! You are not a poetess, but a goddess. Look out, Vickie... your secret's out. We're expecting (hard to imagine) even more stellar heights. Like Tony says, "top drawer"... only I know how it is with you goddess's: you never stop at top! (And now, my Toy Story quote: To infinity, and beyond.)
Very sensual, I would like to know these songs of climax. I would check-out "You Tube" and play them on facebook. As always Vickie your writings are top shelf.
WOW! By the time I got to the penultimate line, waltzing was out the door and quickstepping was on my mind!
It's so nice to be back reviewing, again, but I do seem to be somewhat out of condition. Perhaps flicking on the radio and enjoying a few orgasmic love songs might help.
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whispery like butterflies across the sky.
this line is just beautiful.
thanks for all your work vickie.
amazing.
dave
John
Be always safe,
Karen
LOVE and PEACE
TONY
Thanks again, beautiful.
Always,
Deborah
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It's so nice to be back reviewing, again, but I do seem to be somewhat out of condition. Perhaps flicking on the radio and enjoying a few orgasmic love songs might help.
Five-star, Vickie Baby!
Richard