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Balms of Love's Harmony
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...you inspire my sensate muses with garden songs and delectations

Balms Balms of Love’s Harmony His skin ivory as painted snowfall cold with a distilling presence lost inside the ghost fumed muses His eyes pale within an amber hue golden rain drops staining each word from the pursing of his scarlet lips piercing thorny putrescent reasons underlining his visions with shadows the nightfall quenches his essence knotted inside the garden of dreams ...as I too bath inside this slumberous darkness I realize that I am also but a dreamer’s dream Waning my own thoughts upon the bounty Where I light beeswax candles in the garden Drifting with the sweet sprigs of woody lilacs Entrancing my soul into the moonspun visions I begin dancing with the whispery muses of time Embracing the sonata of their diaphanous essence as I become upon the perfuming trellis of blooming honeysuckle Surrendering my soul into these intimate balms of Love’s harmony Poetry by Victoria L. McColley

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on February 11, 2013

this is romance of and for the sense
as well as celebration of spirit and exceptional awareness

a delight, Vickie

harmony and light

john

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on February 10, 2013

sweet thoughts of spring.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

I got all balmy just reading it. ;-) You sure have wrapped up the essence of a woman's attraction.

Ron

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Not much I can add to what's already been said. An excellent piece, Victoria, Write on!

Reviewed by D Johnson

Victoria, you have this unique talent of making seldom used words come alive on the page, wakening all of the senses.
Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Intoxicating write!!! your pen is a gem, well painted my darling...

Reviewed by George Carroll

Haven't read many poems better than this exquisite insightful poem on hopeful love.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

From "His skin ivory as painted snowfall" to "Surrendering my soul into these intimate balms of Love�s harmony" there is seduction within every line and verse. A step-by-step toward harmony and and intimate wonderland, rendered to the reader with great tenderness and persuasion . . .