Each tile covers every area of you
Measured by the square foot of your bliss
Being placed piece by piece
To fit on the walls of your life.
A tile of hugs
A tile of support
A tile of compassion
A tile of sweetness
These are the tiles of my love
On the floors of your beauty
On the roofs of your desire
On the countertops of your foundation
They make you whole and complete
A tile of understanding
A tile of compatibility
A tile of trust
A tile of sensitivity
These are the tiles of my love
You can't find them at a hardware store
You can only find them inside of my heart.
There always here for you to depend on
Now,Today,Tomorrow and eternity
Tiles of my love,tiles of my love
They will forever be the tiles of my love
I love the way you can expand your imagination through one precious tile area and make it fine poetry such as this, I enjoyed your poem Edwin will done : )
Well Edwin,
I am very happy that I finally got around to reading your poems. Thanks a mil for the great read. I am so very glad for discovering Authorsden. So many awesome and talented people on this site.
Regards,
Nicole
Love, yes you have to built it connect the dots.
Thanks for taking the time to read my poetry. My goal is one day be on The Ellen DeGeneras Show and recite the poem to Ellen & Portia.
Reviewed by Donna DeLong Matthews (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2009
I loved the way you described the
building blocks of love. You took
an oh so complex emotion and placed
it in words that all can understand.
especially the below verse...
You can only find them inside of my heart.
There always here for you to depend on
Now,Today,Tomorrow and eternity
Tiles of my love,tiles of my love
They will forever be the tiles of my love
Awesomely summed up my new friend.
Enjoyed very much
Hello Edwin, wow!!! What a great piece of creative writing this poem is. Enjoyed every word of it. How could one not, as the lines flow with imaginable descriptions of love..Am putting you on my list of people I want to track. Thank you for sharring this..
A beautiful ode of love which touches the heart. She sure is a lucky lady and must be extra special! I like the consept of tiles, its unique and different........M
Sounds like my heavenly father's house. You live a compassionate life of hope and trust that you share with us through your writing. Thank you for this beautiful poem, and for your many visits to my Den to share your thoughtful comments as well.
This romantic write makes me think of a beautiful temple or palace in an Arabian nights fairy tale........it's passionate, and softly romantic.......solid and declared........beautiful.......pax A
I think you have captured the true meaning of love and romance. Love, support, compassion, and sensitivity come straight from the heart. Women want desire and passion woven into all of the tiles that you have written about. This is a beautiful poem!
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Thank you for sharing "Tiles Of My Love".
In appreciation,
Dixie Dawn Michelle
reminds me of the fruit of the
spirit! God has really blessed you
with His Love and favor!
P.S. Love And Prayers
Always!
I am very happy that I finally got around to reading your poems. Thanks a mil for the great read. I am so very glad for discovering Authorsden. So many awesome and talented people on this site.
Regards,
Nicole
Thanks for taking the time to read my poetry. My goal is one day be on The Ellen DeGeneras Show and recite the poem to Ellen & Portia.
building blocks of love. You took
an oh so complex emotion and placed
it in words that all can understand.
especially the below verse...
You can only find them inside of my heart.
There always here for you to depend on
Now,Today,Tomorrow and eternity
Tiles of my love,tiles of my love
They will forever be the tiles of my love
Awesomely summed up my new friend.
Enjoyed very much
Hugs
D
cheers
Mlton
Mary
Barbara
Befitting title indeed.
Thoroughly enjoyed the gentleness throughout the entirity of "Tiles Of My Love."
The subtle placement of each word was perfect and heartfelt.
Again another loving and kind poem to share, wishing you all the best.
~Gwendolyn
Zahra
This poem is written with wonderful declaration of love for another, filled with beautiful sentiments. I love it!!!
Sandie Angel :o)
Rockie
Very well done.
Georg