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I asked the Universe!
by Jeanette Foresta → (All Poetry by Jeanette Foresta)
  
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I asked the universe for a house by the sea

with a white balcony

and a man just for me

we can sit and have some tea

just him and me

on my terrace

by the sea.

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 Reviews of "I asked the Universe!"
Reviewed by Heather Bricklin (Reader)
Reviewed on January 12, 2003
Simple things are often the most beautiful. The visual effects are perfect for the poem.
Reviewed by richard poor
Reviewed on August 20, 2002
well, i liked it,but ya know,i think you could have used this for a greater jumpin board....still,it got me in such few words!
Reviewed by Russ Okamura (Reader)
Reviewed on August 20, 2002
What a beautiful prose, makes me wish I had a ship I could sail by your terrace to see your beautiful house by the sea!
Reviewed by Melissa Rives
Reviewed on August 20, 2002
ahh...how lovely...hope you get it all! :)
Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Reviewed on August 20, 2002
Yes, let's have some tea and some vodka shots as well. :) Good one, Jeanette.
Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)
Reviewed on August 20, 2002
Hope you get it soon.. ;)
Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on August 20, 2002
This is a wonderful write... and a very good lesson for us all... or at least for me.
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 19, 2002
hope your reply is divine ;)(love your hat)
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on August 19, 2002
8-19-02

But, Alas It Gave You a House By a Tree...

TRASK
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on August 19, 2002
Wonderful creativity...love the animation and your picture slide show!
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