Melt With Me (poem) by Sheila Roy on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 29, 2009

I'm breathless! Very sensuous write, Sheila. And although I prefer lyrical verse, this one is beautiful. You certainly stood up to the challenge. Bravo!

Anna

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo

Reviewed on June 17, 2009

Oh Sheila! This is a breathy piece of sensuality! I love its erotic hint and softness...like a verse in whispers. Just beautiful! Hugs, Elizabeth

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on February 21, 2009

What a delightful, sensuous poem, exquisite in its unfolding as only a woman can express, her inner most desire. Pure poetry at its best. I also like rhyming poetry but alas I have not the talent or the word smith ability to do it justice, but I try. Your are a delight in any venue.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on December 30, 2008

I prefer rhyme as well..however this is superb!
Truly an exceptional piece..

Blessings,

Vesna .)

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on December 19, 2008

Free Flow, Rhyme; anything you choose...you have not to worry...
"Melt With Me" acclaim the poetic prowess of loves sensual seductiveness through your pen poetess....
I Melt With You :)
Peace, Love & Poetry
Embraced~Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi Benyehu (Reader)

Reviewed on December 19, 2008

The mind of a Poet is a creative engine of beauty, wonders and grace to diffuse love, harmony; to learn and to teach; to instruct Solons and to inspire kings and Sovereign queens; to defend art and the language; and to stimulate intuition and imagination.

"Melt With Me" is a multi color poetic bouquet of orchids diffusing scent of bliss.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on December 18, 2008

Sheila,this is a beautiful poem.I want to say that poetry is like a big box of ice cream.Each poem has a different flavor,but at the same time it is delicious to the reader's eye and it makes them feel good in their hearts.Poetry is poetry no matter if a poem rhymes or not.All of us are bless to have this talent and skill.You are very talented and you are good at what you do.You don't have to change your style for anybody.I know that poet wasn't trying to hurt your feelings or anything,but I think its stupid that she would criticize you just because your poetry always rhyme.Take care of yourself and stay true to yourself

Edwin

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on December 17, 2008

A very sensuous write with passionate promise. Great job. Blessings.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on December 11, 2008

The allure of this poem is masterful. Excellent. Liz

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on December 7, 2008

Beautiful, passionate and romantic
Outstanding write, most enjoyable
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Duane Weide (Reader)

Reviewed on April 7, 2008

You made me melt:) this is a beautiful and passionate piece. Once again you've created an enchanting write. Well done!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on December 14, 2007

Well you didn't melt me but I think you melted my brain with this beautifully sensual delight that draws the reader, especially the male reader, right into your arms and the beauty that is yours. To capture that strong an image and deliver it in poetry is fantastic. Well done my dear friend Shiela...loved every line.

Fee

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on December 14, 2007

This is beautiful sensuous poetry...it is a shame some writers criticize others in their craft...but in all honesty...I have read the majority of rhyme poets that lack the skill of meter and flow and many other maladies making rhyme poems somewhat tedious to read, but I know that in time and with some support they are likely to improve through reading others...but in your case, you have mastered that style and this is an example of free form which lifts countless restrictions on the write itself...again you have managed to write a beautiful piece to be quite proud of...especially in the genre of romance, which many find difficulty in expressing. Here, anyone would melt after reading this fine piece of work. All would agree...you excel in whichever style you choose or prefer.
Amor

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on December 13, 2007

Sheila,

Very romantic, sensual an even a bit erotic. Your poem massages the senses. Your imagery gradually erupts in the end. I love the way you change from the receiver to the giver. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on December 13, 2007

Goodness ... my blood pressure went up while reading this sensitive and sensual recount dear Sheila. Hard, soft, freckled, trembling, a circling tongue, greedily in the grips of passion ... I'm going home early today! (-:

As far as the criticism is concerned, there will always be those who find something they want to change in what you do. When that happens I always return the favor. I have seen in vision the red rose arguing with the yellow sunflower about changing her color to more compliment her own hues.

We, as writers, all have our own styles and unique voices - this is by design! You are a rare and talented woman that will be encouraged by those who have wisdom to do so!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on December 13, 2007

You may not believe this but my heart missed a beat or two when I read this; seriously, I thought I might experience "la petite mort." Thank you, Sheila. Love and hugs and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on December 13, 2007

The sensuality of exotic thoughts needs no rhyme here...it has been melted away by the passion of rhytmn and flow as you place us within the view of an expressive touch of ....

nice work...very nice...

enjoyed...

Art Sun...

Reviewed by Keith Rowley

Reviewed on December 13, 2007

As always, excellent.
As for the person who criticised you for the use of rhyme, I'm quite aghast!!!!

The engineered cadence of rhyming verse requires considerable mastery of the language in my own opinion. Quality work in that genre is rare and precious.

Poorly executed rhyming verse is very easily perceived as the work of an amateur, whereas the unstructured emotional verbal spew of a half educated aspirational poet who frenetically dumps the contents of his/her overwrought mind onto the unfortunate virginity of a blank page often seems impressive at first sight. It's often self indulgent, unstructured crap.

You do both beautifully!

Keith

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on December 13, 2007

Exquisite. Passionate. I melt, reading such beautiful poetry as this--well done, Sheila.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on December 13, 2007

A lovely shape on the "page" for this poem (I should say screen, but I prefer to think of it as a page... old-fashioned me! ;-)).

The font size looks tiny on my Mac's screen though...

Anyway, passionate and sensuous words for this piece of poetry.

Axilea