True love is everlasting,
Even when a heart's betrayed.
Seek the light of happiness,
It's all for which we've prayed.
Love this, Eddy. I want to think I've been "betrayed" so it gives me an excuse for hurting. She did not "betray" me. I love her more than ever. Your words spoke to me. Thank you. Love and peace,
“[As] life's footsteps slip away.” It's such a wonderful line, like most of the poem that is filled with so much wisdom and insight for such a brief discourse.
You have real talent and others here are noticing it as well as I.
Ron
Reviewed by Diane Miller (Reader)
Reviewed on March 9, 2013
This is interesting you make mention of the other author. A conclusion can be made from this wonderful expressive poem you are filled with frustration. A conclusion of dreams lost with this author or someone else in your life.
Heartfelt wonderful poem excellent expression.
Di
Reviewed by Gert van Weenen (Reader)
Reviewed on March 9, 2013
We adjust our dreams with the time that passes by but may they always be beautiful.
Sweet dreams and beautiful memories are the fruit of a loving soul.
A beautiful poem Ed
Reviewed by Gail D (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2013
I believe dreams change if you can't fulfill the dreams you want. Disappointments can do that. Seeking the light of happiness is the best thing to do. Prayer is the best thing you can do as well.
The wise heart always keeps sweet memories...
and aye dreams can change daily....
conclusions at best are one-sided and only
to the person who forms them...
Life is a mystery upon all of us...
Excellent poetry...
Love and Light
Lily
(thank you for the recognition that I inspired this - but you spelled my last name wrong)
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Even when a heart's betrayed.
Seek the light of happiness,
It's all for which we've prayed.
Love this, Eddy. I want to think I've been "betrayed" so it gives me an excuse for hurting. She did not "betray" me. I love her more than ever. Your words spoke to me. Thank you. Love and peace,
Regis
True love is everlasting,
Even when a heart's betrayed.
Great lines!
You have real talent and others here are noticing it as well as I.
Ron
Heartfelt wonderful poem excellent expression.
Di
Sweet dreams and beautiful memories are the fruit of a loving soul.
A beautiful poem Ed
Gail
and aye dreams can change daily....
conclusions at best are one-sided and only
to the person who forms them...
Life is a mystery upon all of us...
Excellent poetry...
Love and Light
Lily
(thank you for the recognition that I inspired this - but you spelled my last name wrong)
budd