The shadowing blue line of the ocean.
Met the paler blue of the sky.
Sailing in a cruise ship in the Islands.
First night's dinner was succulent grilled mahimahi.
It is a favorite food of the island people.
We took along cool clothes in the island style.
To wear everyday on the ship. Into the pool each day I did swim.
Met new friends while swimming at the pool and in the jacuzzi.
Loved the coconut palms swaying in the breeze.
Watched people hang gliding, snorkeling, surfing, scuba diving.
Saws girls in their bikini's strutting along the beaches soaking up the sun. Eventually going into the water to cool off because of the hot sun.
Everday it rains some on the islands, just a short sprinkle.
Delicious pineapple, rum and coconut coolers to drink.
Had a cone of rum raisin ice cream on the beach.
Listened to island music to be drooling over.
Strolling along the gift shops on the ship,
purchasing cheeses and gifts.
Pastel colors surrounding us all around.
Sunset over the island, the colors must be seen to be believed.
The sea was increditably blue going to a translucence
where the water shallowed.
Get a glimpse of this and you think you are in heaven.
Going through all this in my lifetime made me more
sanquine about the future.
Thank you for transporting me along on your cruise vicariously through your poem. I've had friends take cruises and have often thought about what it would be like. Alas, I'm married to one who easily gets motion sickness on airplanes--I cringe at the thought of what would happen on a ship in the ocean so I'll have to be satisfied with "Descriptive Island Cruise/... It would be nice if the kids wrote a shared poem about the trip they are about to take--waht did they learn and experience from the trip.
sounds great, makes me want to leave right now, anyway deads referred to those people who are mean, inconsiderate and selfish, not wore out legs, hope you haven't forgot how to smile and be friendly
Reviewed by Todd-Michael St. Pierre (Reader)
Reviewed on August 5, 2008
Very panoramic Lois... the imagery was bright and warm too! Great job!
Your poem is about as close as I'll come to an island cruise for quite awhile! Colorful and enjoyed the tour.... I'm guessing you live in FL now and went to the Carib. Yes?
later, michael
Oh, you capture the flavors, the sights, the sounds of being on the high seas perfectly. Thank you for the vacation, needed this, Lois! And I didn't gain ten pounds on your words - whoo - hooooo! LOL Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Saving this to cruise on again and again. :) Thanks!
YOU totall freekin' amaze Me! I traveled with your 2 girls to Florida! I love the melting pot, we go to one a lot, and cheese and crackers/etc. and my favorite drink! A glass of wine to clink! The movie theatre sounds exciting, I can see them all around laughing and smiling!
I traveled far and wide, (with your super imagery) to Maryland, never been there either, but dousing butter on seafood fair, I do I must declare! Nomatter where, there Lobsters!
I love this quest I was on, Thank you Lois for bringing me/us along! I love your style of writing too, it's an easy flow that I find new~!
STay Positive!
Enjoy! all the sweet memories!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady Sheeexoooo
An account of adventures in Scandinavia that involved flying dragons, Russian and German submarines, old WW2 era battlefields, Finnish foxes (female kind), Finnish-Mexican cuisine and much more. Written for the most part with a light touch, it ends o
Met the paler blue of the sky."
This is a gorgeous image Lois. And your write transports the reader with ease. Blessings ...
Very good indeed.
Tony
Love,
Eileen
later, michael
Thank you!
Sandie Angel :o)
Beautiful write, very descriptive.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Saving this to cruise on again and again. :) Thanks!
needed this!! xOx 'Pea' xOx
Sheila
Love Tinka
I traveled far and wide, (with your super imagery) to Maryland, never been there either, but dousing butter on seafood fair, I do I must declare! Nomatter where, there Lobsters!
I love this quest I was on, Thank you Lois for bringing me/us along! I love your style of writing too, it's an easy flow that I find new~!
STay Positive!
Enjoy! all the sweet memories!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady Sheeexoooo
WRITE ON! and on and on... I want to tag along!
Regis