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Be Real
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To all who cherish romance. . .each other m o r e. ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Be Real “Make me laugh.” “Make me laugh.” Then the tears flow. S p a t s. “Did this.” “Did that.” Make each other hot. Volunteer to bring ice. Coffee, good and hot. Then chill our sheets with controlling picks make us lonely. B i c k e r s. “Nothing.” “Nothing!” Inventory: years, no, decades, holding hands. Watch your back, watch mine.. Many nights help pace. Rock our two young. Babies grow. Battle colds, cold bottles, clammy heads. Colic. cramps and hacks. More paces. Stumble arm in arm, two hope two heads are better. H e a r t s. Weathered nature’s tsunamis. Quakes. Destructing kin. Lingering deaths, and sudden. Flue, flux, fakes and being cut. Loss quote of income unquote. Shoe after shoe leans us in. We weather yin and yang sex. Breath for breath, tear for tear. Sweat, curl, dry. H e a r t s skip, then go to town. Still warm a bed. Still laugh, still cry. Hand me your hand. I love you. I love you. Don't need quotes. ©) Phyllis Jean Green, October, 2005

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on October 3, 2005

Excellent Pea, a compilation of real life spent with someone...

love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on October 2, 2005

Seems after years of cramming being 'real', we realize, is what we never were. :-) Good piece of reality check!

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Wonderful work, Phyllis!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed

Reviewed on October 1, 2005

Love. . . can't do good with it at times, and always can't do without it. I think if we didn't have hormones Sis. P, we'd all be better off in midlife. (At least we could use a dial or somethin'!)

Long live love, even if it hurts a bit,
blessin's,
cynth'ya

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

The story of a lifetime shared. Excellent work, Pea.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Treading water in the tumultuous seas of matrimony. Climbing the ricky, craggy cliffs of relationships. Stumbling over the blazing hot desert of angry words and shart retorts. Ah, wouldn't life be friggin' dull without all that?

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Beautiful offering Pea!!

Love Tinka