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Constant Fidgeter with O.C.D. & A.D.D--Leonardo da Vinci.4/15/1452-5/2/15}
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 Constant Fidgeter with O.C.D. & A.D.D
 {Leonardo da Vinci. 4/15/1452-5/2/1519}

 
The child would not sit still in class.
‘Failed to complete assigned task.’
All the young’un ever did was draw
or stare out the window,like he thought
he saw through the mountain to Florence.
Uncanny at maths, turned out.
What a shame he was doomed to flail
through life {One pictures Einstein
wearing Dunce.  Other drummers
with genius IQ’s and little tolerance
for `1-plus-1-a-b-c.}  Oh the danger
of a refocusing mind.   Leonardo?
They should put that fellow away
before he kills himself with gimcrack
number x or attempts to fly
over Vinci, or we die laughing.
at his scrawl.  Muttering obsession
with the beak of a kite or breast-
like peak or how to gauge the squareness
of a hand.    So he made something
of himself.   Few paintings, sculpture
hither’n’ yon. {Born out of wedlock, psst-
psst.}   You know his father left him out
of the will.    Just applied himself
at school, think what he could have been.
Ow, well.  Just another rustic.  
Bumpkin, loony-tune.  You don’t think
he  died cradled by King Francis-?
Myth, that’s what I thought.
 
Grazie, grazie, padrone dei padroni,
per il gioco dello stesso tamburo vecchio.*

 
(c) Phyllis Jean Green,  March, 2007                  >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

*Thank you, thank you, master of masters,
for not playing the same old drum.
 
 
 
 
  

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Reviewed by David Young
Reviewed on March 15, 2007
"Just applied himself
at school, think what he could have been."

Just think how much some would have excelled with understanding rather than being labelled bumpkin, loony-tune, or maybe Liberal Artist.

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on March 7, 2007
Wow enjoyed this so much Pea, I have a child in my classroom who has a form of autism, he continually wants to as he say's illustrate pictures, and he is an outstanding artist. He is very a very private child, who lives in his own world! His autism isn't severe but limits his social skills somewhat, I have overheard others whisper about him that they are glad that he wasn't in their classroom, and such...but what they don't see is the real person within, he is very brilliant, he is seven and can visually solve math equations that many third and fourth grade students cannot solve. He writes fantastic stories and designs what he calls video graphics. He is like a walking book of information, last week he illustrated the five phases of the moon and labled them, his information is unlimited...I am having his IQ tested, anxious to see the results. Yes, he is a bit unique, and he is often distracted, but one would think he wasn't listening. I feel that I am given the students that God knows I need, and they are given the teacher that He knows they need. Great write, I would love to show this to my students father, we have a meeting Friday concerning his progress.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on March 7, 2007
I find this write very interesting
Because my grandson is A.D.D
I'm hoping he too can be a genius
Interesting thoughts Excellent
Message within this write!!
Great Job!!
Love and Peace to you Always..Morning Star

Reviewed on March 7, 2007
(((Pea))),

As one who fidgets and has some OCD tendancies, this one resonates. Who's laughing at them now? They got the last laugh. In each twitcher or compulsive being could be a genius. :) BRAVO for standing up for those considered less than perfect. A beautiful write--saving this one.

(((((HUGS))))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on March 7, 2007

Couldn't get it in the first reading, but got it all by the fourth reading.

"Constant Fidgeter with O.C.D. & A.D.D--Leonardo da Vinci.4/15/1452-5/2/15}"


In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 7, 2007
Interesting write SHeila!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on March 7, 2007
YEP thats all they do is draw, zero out and calculate, i know...LOL
Geniuses live in their own world.
Loved this, thanks Pea..Hugs Ch'erie

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on March 6, 2007
fabulous incarnation of the voice of the mass misunderstanding of different

Reviewed by Sharon Jordan
Reviewed on March 6, 2007
Interesting thoughts on a genius.

Reviewed by Marcia Duning (Reader)
Reviewed on March 6, 2007
Right!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 6, 2007
Well they do say genius is next to insanity so maybe that is why he was a little...errrrrrr eccentric.

Fee

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 6, 2007
Interesting write...Hugssssssssssssss

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 6, 2007
Just another rustic.
Bumpkin, loony-tune.

Fascinating piece, Phyllis, and too bad we don't have many more - just like him! But maybe we do; I sure hope so.


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