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Jupiter Falls
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*Art: digital graphic "Blueberry Night" by Amor Sabor

“Jupiter Falls”

Her hips transferred the energy of her power
triangulated upwards towards her navel
as Jupiter falls swiftly below the horizon
of a grapefruit sunset between her thighs
she swivels barely a heartbeat away
while her feminine torso twists and turns
and her omnipresent breasts hover free
suspended above by invisible threads
mesmerizing with such beautiful precision
reaching into me like pomegranate roots
penetrating the framework of my aching
with the tentacles of her untainted love
a liquid paragraph of sweet sensual sighs
issues forth from her soft half parted lips
saturating the hollows of my waiting flesh
with the brilliant hues of sacred moons
where I am awakened by her restless tides
and the throbbing of an incessant heart
as she turns the pages of pure ecstasy
with the vibrations of her quivering thighs

We stand midstream in the river Nile
where this love in the ripples was born
under magenta skies and a crescent moon
existent prematurely above our heads
our hands palm to palm pressed firmly
facing each other in the patient light
an aura surrounds the passion of our bodies
the atoms of our energy revive in a mist
through the magic of sweet love and lust
in the restless hunger that resides within
she sees me through dark chrome shadows
where I melt contentedly in her radiance
like a pocket watch upon the frozen ledge
springing forth in the dawn of her smile
transformed in the white light of a kiss
as our skin sloughs off in the heat of love
and the ancients stand in our shadows
content in the revised hunger of our eyes

We reflect the destiny of our obsessions
wrapped up in the heat of dear mother earth
that envelops us in the art of our intimacy
painting our pleasures in unbridled exchanges
inside each other in the thrusts of salvation
waking to the whispers of the soft falling rain
while the muted flickering candles resign
and the comfort of each other’s warmth resides
embraced fully through eternity’s gilded gates
the obverse and inverse melded in the passion
elevated with the fury of embers in the wind
and Jupiter falls into our hearts and souls
where it splashes in the aftermath of lust
and is reborn in the pursuit of our elation
as it strikes the ocean of dream and desire
enveloping us with bright stars and galaxies
before we fall asleep in each other’s arms

© 2008 Amor Sabor
  

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 Reviews of "Jupiter Falls"
Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on November 3, 2010
This is superb writing, Amor, with a natural fluency without punctuation and with minimal use of 'and'...that is so hard to achieve,
and the images and their range and impact are simply top drawer.

John

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on June 1, 2008
good one, i like this

Reviewed by Mimi Malaika (Reader)
Reviewed on February 29, 2008
You really are amazing. I love reading your work. You always inspire me to want to write more. Keep it up!!

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
Reviewed on February 2, 2008
I cannot find the words to express my admiration for your talent, Amor. To repeat Phyllis, W O W!!!!
Love,
annie

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on January 26, 2008
W O W ! Got me tongue-tied !! Thank you so much for posting this, Amor. If your name means love, you are well-named indeed!

Have to say it again: W O W !!

Gratefully,

'Pea'

Reviewed on January 22, 2008
As artistic and erotic as always Amor, truly beautiful.

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on January 21, 2008
Awesome, my friend! Enjoyed very much!

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on January 21, 2008
speechless......the big bang theory all cosmic and lusty......tender and human....applause
you sure can write!!!!
pax A

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on January 20, 2008
Ah yes!
I'm never disappointed when I visit your Den!
Indeed a man for all seasons..
Thank you for being YOU thus gifting us all with your mind, heart and soul!
Exquisite piece! ( am saving it)

Vesna :)

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on January 19, 2008
A seductive, passionate, and cleverly written poem with powerful imagery...well done!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
Outstanding-ly HOT! Phew! Is it me, or did "Jupiter Falls" misalign me? :)

It flows like lava from a volcano!
So enjoyed!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
Stunning seductive poetic view of thoughts!!
Sweet passion and Oh so romantic!!
A piece that lives the reader absolutely breathless
Beautifully written poem and love the title
Jupiter Falls!!
Peace Love And hugssss to you....Morning Star

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
A Classic piece of art and poem....well done!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Sanja Dayslink (Reader)
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
Wow - what a beautiful write and image. You are truly gifted. Look forward to reading you more.

Sanja xo

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
Amor,
I'm always astonished by how creatively you approach imagery. So many exceptional and unique descriptions in this poem. You mix nature and romance perfectly!
Sheila

Reviewed by Bella Nye (Reader)
Reviewed on January 18, 2008
I am in awe of your talent! This piece is exquisite!

Thank you for welcoming me to Authors Den, Amor. And I WILL deliver! I promise...

Love,
Bella

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on January 17, 2008
Okay, Don Juan. I'm blushing! --Charlie

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on January 17, 2008
Very romantic indeed!!!!! Great artwork too!!! Enjoyed both!!!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed on January 17, 2008
WOW! I FELL and I can't get up - I think I forgot how to type, I kept hitting the wrong keys LOL
How long did it take you to draw ALL this out of you Amor?
I am truly amazed at your mind, heart, soul, spirits depth!
This is sure a gem of a treasure I will forever savor!
I'm tongue-tied! Don't laugh, I'm serious and spelling all wrong, I want to re-read this again, your style is eloquent, beyond feeling, words are trippy and I love knowing I can share these feelings too~ YOu know Amor, It's not only finding the words in your mind but it's placement too and you have no problems there! The Best part - Falling asleep in eachothers arms! Ahhh.... The beauty of Skin! ETc.
Warmed in the Spirit, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo

STay Positive!
Write ON!

Reviewed by Saberi Roy
Reviewed on January 17, 2008
your poetry is like a vortex, it sucks in with the first line..it's like poetry entering the mind rather than the mind entering poetry....great

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2008
You make romance an endless adventure..
Stay safe Amor
Ron

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on January 16, 2008
Oh my this is a masterpiece,, simply beautiful!
Blessings, Christine

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 16, 2008
flows effortlessly, Amor ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 16, 2008
Amor, every word throbs with passion leaving me
breathless and thankful for the gift of your poetry,
which always gives much pleasure!.luv the art ,too.Both Magnifico!

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on January 16, 2008
Wonderfully picturesque photograph! You have a way of drawing the reading right in, just fantastic....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on January 16, 2008
love the imagination, and Jupiter is one of my favorite planets..perfect to expand the mind :)

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2008
I'm not certain how you are able to write the way you do with no periods and comas and get away with it! Your poem glides along as if floating freely in a very unquie kind of way, excellent, love Holly

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on January 16, 2008
Wow there you've done it again, you continue to take us in this world of your's and we enjoy it, keep it coming and we'll keep reading Amor.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2008
Amor, as an astrologer, I was attracted to your title first of all. Knowing your style, I anticipated the sensuality of the writing and the intense use of imagery to paint rich pictures in the mind of the reader. However, the painting was an extraordinary touch. Some of the lines defy logic, but have an overwhelming appeal, such as "I melt contentedly in her radiance like a pocket watch upon the frozen ledge springing forth in the dawn of her smile..." Lovely, indeed.

Reviewed on January 16, 2008


Enjoyed this seductive and creative presentation along with colorful and glowing edges of "Blueberry Night" artwork. Continued blessings and enlightenment to you.

All the best as always,
~Gwendolyn


Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on January 16, 2008
You have done well Fantasy Merchant! You have placed yore Den Groupies happily in yore bed! It was a truly delightful experience! SC

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
Reviewed on January 16, 2008
flavour of love -absolutely beauti....*faints*

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on January 16, 2008
Between stream of consciousness that leaves one breathless and modern mythological tale... dreamlike; this is my impression when I read your poem. Beautifully chosen title.

Axilea

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2008
Oh my,how beautiful this is darlin,stay safe and well...Hugsssss

Reviewed on January 16, 2008
Such lines--such passion--such--I'm breathless!!!!!!!!!! Amor, few can get me stirred up like you--indeed. Well done! Love the image, too.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. *gaspgaspgasp*

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on January 16, 2008
Words cannot describe the feelings that this piece ignites..The photo and your amazing imagery brings me to my knees to praise the heavens for reading such an epic piece of work..Oh my, I guess I really liked this poem. Thank you for sharing your amazing talent with the world.
Peace, love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed on January 16, 2008
Stunning imagery, Amor; superb writing! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D


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