Now it was either the day before yesterday
Or perhaps a little more closer to a decade
That you heard me in the gentle mist of passion
Where it stirred in the breeze of sweet memory
You saw me in the bright shadows of Neruda
between the brush strokes of Dali and Picasso
and I, in every sense, was left verily flattered
knowing that my heart slipped onto the pages
I continued to write on into the soft midnights
That caressed the welling eyes of your favor
That whispered in the midst of dear passion
And lifted your palpitations to clear dangers
I would not subside in the warmth of loving
That failed to die in the bright morning after
Long when most disappeared in the distance
Or would not return in the long lost echoes
It was evident that your heart wore sunlight
Just as if it were a robe for a high priestess
And I, In the colored rays that love emitted
Was highlighted in the grace of your vision
It was obvious that I would only remember
The warmth that you radiated around me
And the security of being one unforgotten
Even through the faint passage of time
And in the loud silence we would discover
As the minute hand freezes in its sweep
Even if sometimes the clock stops forever
That love somehow retrieves its own place
Amor the perfection and warmth of your poetry has been missed. So beautiful, stunning as always. Sometimes I think you must have been a personal friend of Neruda.
Expressions of love so beautifully written. Softness in each line and loved the mention of Neruda (one of my absolute favorite poets; oh how he inspires) ... just lovely work! ~Elizabeth
Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
Reviewed on November 2, 2010
It's so nice to read your beautiful poetry again, Amor. I can truly relate to this beautiful poem. Take care Amor ... Aloha :))
As always, you reach in and grab a piece of my heart with your verses.
You certainly have not lost your touch. Simply stirring and profoundly romantic poetry at your best.
Missed you, hope you will catch up on some of my poetry.
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Thank you for sharing your wonderful
gift!
Blessings,
Margaret
Hugs, Diana...
WHat an honor to read your work!!
Love Tinka
Regis
You have an uncommon gift for expressing the depths and heights of romance.
Connie
a beautiful canvas Amor
This poetic offering is intimate
and so very lovely
Love's Bouquet
Vickie
She couldn't really answer just at that moment.
You certainly have not lost your touch. Simply stirring and profoundly romantic poetry at your best.
Missed you, hope you will catch up on some of my poetry.
Much peace, love and light,
Amber
Best Wishes,
Christine