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Fissures Never Closing

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

To think there’s any justification for a country placing its mental health crisis at such a low priority is akin to wearing a black eye mask while sleeping in the dark. (photo by Nick Bostrom)

Friday, February 14, 2014


Poem Artwork
Fissures Never Closing
by Odin Roark

Cracks at first
Spiderweb in nature
Little hurts
Unintended pain
Growing-up suffering

Emotional droughts impact
Times when no amount
Of heart’s moisture
Can irrigate the desiccation

When nothing is at risk
When seeding
Growth
Blooming
And harvest
Have never been experienced

Tempest stays dormant

Winds of passion sweep by
Effecting nothing
Moving dry and lifeless breath
Into vacuous memories
Associations unlived
Connections unmade

Rage rumbles unexpected
Molten anger broils within
Eruption threatens
Evaporative feelings escape
Disappear

All that’s left convulses
Its eye of the storm intensifies
The once spider web lessons
All but forgotten

Explosions sever the foundation
Blinding hot emotion ensues
Spasms of wretched anguish
Burst to the surface
Rendering all in its path
Buried

So goes that which is ignored
Where state and federal policy flounders
While concern for the have-alls
Maintains status quo
Remaining safely housed
In its bureaucratic bubble
Floating above so many fissures
That may never close
   


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Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on February 15, 2014
The lack of mental health services in this country is predicated on the belief that such people should be locked away. And the for-profit prison system is happy to comply. M.True

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 15, 2014
I applaud anyone who attempts to help those with mental health problems. So many go untreated and become a threat to their families, friends, and sometimes, society. I suppose because some treatment is so difficult that lobotomy was chosen when nothing else seemed to work. Now it seems to be drugs that are used instead of real therapy. Every time I hear about someone going wrong they are always, "off their meds."

I'm glad you gave a descriptor in front. Merely reading the poem, I suggest that it was about the underclass rising up to strike out at the have-alls.

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on February 15, 2014
This poem, as so much of your poetry, screams in the face of injustice. Back then when we opened the doors to the mental health institutions and shoved them onto an unknowing populace it was the beginning of what has grown into a monster-mob with no idea how to live in a sane society.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 15, 2014
So goes that which is ignored
Where state and federal policy flounders

So very sadly true, on so many fronts today.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on February 14, 2014
i so agree with you Odin
budd


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