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Floating Umbrellas In A Swimming Pool

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Even though travel books paint modern cities and its people with bright colors, surreal and muted, urban life remains for many an ever increasing effort to survive.

Wednesday, January 6, 2016


Poem Artwork
Floating Umbrellas in a Swimming Pool
by Odin Roark


Urban density,
a dissonant crush of melodies
once shouted from pushcarts and rooftops,
sidewalks and crosswalks,
stadiums and ball fields,
the tremolo of high Cs,
the basso profundo of low Gs,
now vacuous aftershocks,
as desperate gasps of today’s id
asks ego's replay of history to stop.

Today…

Sensory mirrors of fractured reflections
rapidly become shards of desperation,
continuing tight clutching to the bosom,
a resonant vibration suffocating in denial.

All while…

Others of means and escape
listen earnestly to echoes of their own company,
the hearing of such isolated talk,
the seeing of such narcissistic indulgence,
obviates simple traffic jams of awareness,
and become today's repetitive mash-ups.

Such are the hubristic grumblings and shelter cornering
against the urban mind’s cyclonic weather,
all while the lost voices of honesty,
the once integral essence of all mankind,
murmurs silent implorations,
hoping its reality of drowning hope,
its futile cries for help
go not forever unheard.

For many of the fortunate…

Puzzling is their modern unawakening,
an enigmatic protecting of themselves against themselves,
lest they become like the less fortunate,
mere spent umbrellas floating in a swimming pool.


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Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on January 9, 2016


compelling read


Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 7, 2016
I can't help comparing the burgeoning humanity of the city of yesterday, more in the streets than in habitation that was so vile that the only place with any air was in the street. Today, even during the busiest part of the day, there are not many on the street. Most people are ensconced in their high-rise cubicles, offices, and restaurants, far removed from the street. Making the modern city look a bit sterile, still grueling for those who do not have the means to live the city style.

Ron

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on January 6, 2016
I instantly thought of the best seller "What Color is Your Parachute?" on reading your poem. It is a guide to employment and survival in today's changing environment. And while reading my usual short list of truncated reality, I came across a Princeton study that shows 75 percent of Americans do not have an adequate emergency fund, and 63 percent cannot deal with a $500 emergency. That's a lot of colored umbrellas.

Reviewed by Robert Whitford
Reviewed on January 6, 2016
Would I live in a city? Oh no, definitely no. Bad enough I have to work in one. Most large cities are the hub of death and misery. Hallmarks of a people who have detached themselves from standards of decency. Think we reap what we sow? Very thoughtful poem Odin. Bob


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