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· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

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· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

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· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

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Cosmic Sadness

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

As the supposed superior life of the planet, we’ve a long way to go in accepting and respecting the reality: we are but “Nature’s guests.” (Image by Leena Colibri)

Friday, October 27, 2017


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Cosmic Sadness

Mountains and sea
will coalesce indefinitely,
accepting they are stone and water,
erosion and weather,
yin and yang.

Oceans don’t complain.
They tide high or low.
Pressure released.

Mountains accept weakness
but they suck it up,
hold their strength tight,
occasionally direct some offspring
to the valley floor without resentment or regret,
clinging not to a bad mood
because they might not represent the highest peaks.

Nature doesn’t long to be something it’s not.
Sea = water.
Stones = rock.
Sun up.
Sun down.
Just being.
No enhancement needed.
None at all.

Now humans…

Nature doesn’t take well to our “Me, Me, Me.”

Can we learn the lesson here,
or will we continue to wear thin our visitation privilege?




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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 28, 2017
I don't see the earth, air and water as having any emotion. But I do see life as having emotion. There are people that study plants and will tell you that plants react to their environment. And, as I have long suspected, studies show that animals are much smarter than we originally thought and even have emotions, dreams and thoughts similar to ours.

And your poetry which says, "Why me, me, me," all the time is very appropriate for the situation we are in. So dependent upon this planet and with no Star Trek or Star Wars easy solutions right around the corner. The cosmos is vast and lonely. We won't find a better place than this and have to stop dreaming about heaven after we are gone. Make something of this life that is worthwhile and positive.

Ron

Reviewed on October 28, 2017
It's greed that is heard by those who could make this "lesson" heard and taken REAL action on, not just some long red tape. All Earthians must pitch in.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on October 27, 2017
Your poem coincides today with my "lessons of the seasons." Indeed, we have much to learn from them.


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