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Levitatin' Crushin' Baggage

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

An old slam that still resonates. To drag old baggage behind is debilitating. To float its rock-like weight skyward, … how relieving the closure. (Image by Tommy Ingberg)

Thursday, July 22, 2021


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Levitatin’ Crushin’ Baggage

 

Swirlin’ up a storm of black and white shards

whippin’ up words

slamin’ down stanzas

takin’ life to that place it fights all day

bangin’ noise ‘gainst the wall

 

Gettin’ life’s attention

that’s my game

levitatin’ crushin’ baggage

takin’ calm’s allusion

way past delusion

over and round illusion

makin’ thunder wait for lightnin’

‘cause that’s how it is

if you’re levitatin’ crushin’ baggage

 

Never no trickle-down birth here

jus’ shakin’ ‘fore the eye-a-the-storm

I’m from womb of all wombs

where contractions hide the screaming

‘midst fluffy white donut guise

mother-pushin’pain it is

if you’re willin’ to stop draggin’ the old into the new

 

Once started

oh lordy

mist of Dick and Jane

gives way to drizzle rain of Catcher in the Rye

later showers swirl round War and Peace

as Infinite Jest hovers

if you’re willing to make the release

 

Mother’s know well

their supple thighs

veterans of whip and lash

deliver DNA with no turning back

if you accept birth can be more than once

 

So if you’re caught in the wake of my flurry

all shite and scared

heart bangin’ heavy

new ventricles panting

eyes needing boarding up

hold tight

think loose

dream open

‘cause maybe

just maybe

the storm’s eye will pass over

calm will appear before the tempest

 

But beware when hallucinations vanish

for inside purity of white

lurks black’s counter spinnin’

life don’t get away that easy

if you’re rebirthing yourself for another day

 

 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 23, 2021
I'm not quite sure what the gist of this is. But I get a feeling it is how darkness always has to get loud and boisterous to be heard over the hushed silence of white purity. So I apologize in advance if I am wrong. ;-)

Ron


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