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Memorial Survival

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Even though I hold out hope each year that this poem will have outgrown its annual restating, each year seems to merely repeat history somewhere in the world.

Sunday, May 28, 2023


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Memorial Survival

 

How small it is,
this bottom of the Dixie cup,
looking skyward,
holding high the torch,
the unemployment check
of another kind.

Held aloft with no regrets,
half-full,
half-empty,
all the same,
someone had to shoulder the orders.

Now in desert camo-dress,
his hand holds forth,
watching fingers pass over,
some manicured with pennies,
some scabbed and scarred with singles,
even children's innocent fingers
dropping nickels and dimes.

Many have acknowledged this,
his back-home identity,
his calling card,
his shingle,
his nameplate.

The mind huddles close now,
few copper and silver,
no blankets of green,
no ingots of gold.

A note floats downward
swathing reality.

“Thank you for your service.
Would you like a job?
What are your skills?
Can you relocate?”

“Sure,” he says,
his eyes upon his severed legs,
each knee protruding,
solitary,
save the Purple Heart pinned securely.

Just let me gather today's windfall, he thinks.
Two pennies,
one nickel,
three quarters,
one subway token.

Relocating again.

Travel.

Enough to get me there.

Pocketing the Dixie cup,
his knuckles pull forward,
surging his mover's dolly,
transporting his hidden hope.

Ahead,
looking back,
his benefactor strides onward,
his missing arm,
yet another lost appendage of honor,
his smile a projection of comradery.

“Not far,” he says…

“Not far.”



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Reviewed on May 30, 2023
Touched me so deeply, Odin. Alabama just passed a law making panhandling illegal. They will arrest all the beggars instead of giving thme a place to live, a job, proper medical and metal health care. No, they rather give those things to illegals.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 29, 2023
Still poignant after all these years. For so many veterans, the war is not over after they come home. Why I advocate providing Medicare for all and a minimum annual wage for all of those who can prove some effort toward utilizing their skills. Why many veterans turn to becoming mercenary soldiers in the many wars going on around the world. But with amputations, that option is out.

So many veterans are unable to hold even an ordinary job because their PTSD is so strong that it prevents them from socializing well except with other veterans, as your poem suggests.

When we can get people up off the sidewalk into shelter and food of their own choosing, they can provide for society what they have left. Even pay taxes.

Ron

Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on May 29, 2023
Aching. Full of ache and arch = “..each year seems to merely repeat history somewhere in the world.” Groundhog Day, Memorial Day, Veterans’ Day, D-Day, May Day. “someone had to shoulder the orders” — very powerful. Your Dixie Cup, Odin, is so very full of your own sensitivity to even write this. Effective how you presented the sequential contributions incrementally more humane, culminating in which person floats the note downward. The beauty of this deliverance is that it puts a magnifying glass on the pain, but also on the true hand-up vs. handout. I love that last stanza, and the “Not far,” lines…..what a finish! ~~ djl

Reviewed on May 28, 2023
The way the government treats our Vets makes. me. nauseous!! Your words get me so worked up, Odin! You express my feelings in a more eloquent way! Every time!!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on May 28, 2023
Such a sad state of affairs, the rise and enduring quality of homelessness in this country. Here in Miami Beach I walk by them every day. Some vets, some not; but all brought to a state of hopelessness not necessarily of their own making. It breaks my heart.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on May 28, 2023
A starkly imaged vignette that brought tears to this reader. Thank you for sharing it. They were prepared to serve, they were prepared to be wounded, they were prepared to die for their country, but when they returned home, they were never prepared to be forgotten. Michele and I help support Tunnel 2 Towers, Wounded Warriors, and the Salvation Army. Peace.... rlc


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