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From Where Came?

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

There are those who have experienced that long tunnel of near-death and survived, and there are those who have experienced the coming back from the brink of death finding it difficult to describe.(Image from Pinterest)

Saturday, June 29, 2024


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 From Where Came?

 

 

From where came…

 

The unexpected odor of immanent departure

Inviting you to never forget

And wipe the moisture from your eyes

As you continued deeper into the unknown

The purpose you knew not of.

 

Was it the turning of a corner

Where two small girls played with their dolls

On the steps of a burned-out building

Its embers still gasping

As if the smoke bore life

Warning of the many threats

Yet to come.

 

From where came…

 

This city of wavering images

Caught in a maelstrom of hollow voices

Challenging you to accept the happening as a dream

Or a preview of the discoveries yet to come.

 

From where came…

 

The sudden calm

Like the pulse of a photographer

Taking aim on the sun about to rise

Or the woman turning the corner

Pushing a baby carriage

Where the quiet of a sleeping life invited you

See for yourself

That it was you cocooned in

A web of lace and wilted rose collective

Where life and death were yet to be determined.

 

From where came…

 

Your emergence from the density of history’s elan vital

Feeling like someone stepping forward after a long illness

Seeing the world with your heart now beating

With the permanence of life’s rhythmic cadence

As lucidity whispered the beginnings

Of memory’s tenacious purpose.

 

Never forgetting

You had slipped through the tenacious grip of finality

Into the many yesterday memories

Today’s happenings

And the unknowns of a future yet to come.

 

 

 



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Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on June 30, 2024
This feels like a searchlight of a poem, relatable in the wide spectrum of the questioning. Four connection lines between six stanzas full of visuals of close details — innocent little girls playing with dolls, catching a sunrise, lace and rose baby blanket. The most enticing lines for me are: “Challenging you to accept the happening as a dream/Or a preview of the discoveries yet to come.” I would value thinking the way of those two lines. If we could endure misfortune as though it were but a dream….how helpful that would be. ~~ djl

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on June 29, 2024
Excellent poem, Odin! There are many books on this subject. For example, "Mercy Ends At The Grave" is a book by my best friend, Ernest Vigil. He was in Denver on a ski trip when I received a phone call explaining that my friend had died. The next day, I received a phone call that he was alive and in a coma but that he would never be able to function as a normal human being again. In his book, he explains his experiences and how he regained 100 percent of all his vital functions. The book also describes his trip to the other side in detail. I have read dozens of books about people who had afterlife experiences in Heaven. They all say the same thing about not wanting to return to their bodies again and the pain they experienced coming back. I am now at a point where I am convinced that to die is to gain. I am not afraid of death as I now only live for the benefit of my family and a few close friends. I am at total peace with my Maker. It's an excellent place to be. Amen, my friend.


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