For some reason I struggled for days to think of something scary to meet this challenge. Hopefully this will work.
Worst Nightmare (William Bonilla’s Challenge)
It all started out with an itch on my arm
I scratched and scratched but it wouldn’t stop
As the spot began to swell, I could see a throbbing
It looked as though there was something moving beneath the surface
Curiously frightened I scratched harder
The more I scratched, the larger the lump
And the more active it became
From beneath the skin, I could now clearly see “something”
I tried to dig it out with my nails, scratching and tearing at my forearm
The fear within me was mounting
Now farther up my arm I was seeing
Smaller bumps beginning to come to life
I could literally feel my skin beginning to crawl
Frenzied, I had to find out what this was
I was losing my cool and I was starting to panic
How was I going to get this out of me!?
As fear eventually took over common sense
I grabbed my pocketknife and began to pick
I was going deep and it was hurting but not bleeding
Whatever it was, it was pushing to the surface wanting to be released
I gouged away at my arm and finally I could see something dark
Just another layer or so and I could see what this was
As I peeled back the final layers
A large cockroach dashed out from the slit in my skin
It was followed by another large roach and about a hundred small ones
Essentially paralyzed, I dug down deeper. I found an empty egg sack
I also found another one ready to open
I plucked it from me in horror and flicked it to the ground
It was strange how, now, the slit was pushing up, looking like a little volcano
The top of my arm was covered with small moving bumps
One by one, an entire army of fire ants exited
Through the opening in my forearm
Once released, I noticed a couple of drops of blood
To my amazement, the gash in my arm was starting to close
Soon, there was no mark left at all
Frozen by fear, I gazed in panic and wondered…Are there more?
Sherry Gail Heim
October 29, 2004
Copyright © Sherry Gail Heim 2004
GAD GAD GAD if i have nightmares, i'm blaming yew
eew eew eww creeeeepy write--there goes my extra hour of sleep
horrifying scary write--so vividly written, compelling...CRINGE thanks a lot LOL
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
i declare you the winna :)
I know you won't believe this but yesterday afternoon, I broke out really bad with something...now I must go check these spots much much closer!
This literally made my skin crawl!
Awesome write Sherry! You have an intense and powerful mind!
Lisa
What creative mind
Awesome write
BRAVO!
William .......Peace
Rising tension throughout adds to the dread
Tremendous drama
Peter
Jack
This reminds me of that urban legand......somebody sniffed a flower and a spider went up their nose or something and laid eggs???
Roaches are so creepy and sneeky.....no wonder they got under your skin!!!
challenge well met Sherry!!!!!!!!!! bravo!
pax A
Love Tinka
:)Sandy
An excellent challenge entry, Sherry, and I love the music with this!
Tommy