Illusive Valentine (poem) by SHERRY G HEIM on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Lynn Barry

Reviewed on January 12, 2007

Absolutely lovely!

Reviewed by Debra Harmes-Kurth (Reader)

Reviewed on January 11, 2007

Simply put, lovely~! The flow is perfect and the rhyme wonderful.
debra

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on January 11, 2007

Sherry this is absolutely beautiful
I am at awe
thanks for sharing

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on January 10, 2007

Sherry this is a sigh poem. Beautifully introspective and longing.

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on January 10, 2007

Owwwwwwwwww this is so beautiful and exceptionally romantic. Thanks Sherry for expressing your motions in such a marvelous, soul-touching way.
Abdi-Noor

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on May 18, 2005

Oh Sherry
This is so beautiful and so romantic so sad and longing. It is Gorgeous Beautiful! Breathtaking! Wonderful!
your hearbeat does echo
within that of my own.
Sherry it is Gorgeous.
Thank You so much.
How I'd love to be walking down the road there in the picture. Peaceful yet perfect for this Exquisitely gorgeous poem. SUPERB!
I've read some beautiful poems here but Sherry this is THE BEST! A keeper forever!
Tracey XO

Reviewed by Michelle Mills

Reviewed on March 19, 2005

I missed this one...it's gorgeous! And the photograph is so peaceful...lovely write Sherry. Michelle

Reviewed by Barbara Terry

Reviewed on February 27, 2005

"Or will I find you tomorrow, in a Valentine's kiss" I have often spoken words like this throughout my entire life. A love that I should have had, was forbidden to me, a life I should have lived, was stolen from me. But this poem is fantastic tho, regardless of what I have gone through. I love the picture of the countryside. I didn't read the printed poem beneath the picture, I read the peom in the picture. It is soooooooo sweet and endearing to one's heart, even mine, as dark as it is. I agree with Lisa that this would make a very good Hallmark card. Yes Sherry, please tell us your secret, to write like this. God has given you a great talent. A sense of humor, to enlighten and brighten another's day. Thnx for sharing dear. May the Lord be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love, peace, & (((HUGS))), your very dear friend in Wisconsin, and sister in Christ our Lord,

Barbara Lynn Terry
"If i have to...Then I may as well be."

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on February 26, 2005

SHERRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow
I adore this!!!!!!!
Just wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!
did I say WOW???
the poem itself, is so romantic and so well written, the meter is perfection, its glorious!
and combined with the art!!!!!!!!!!Now I am inspired!!!
wow
lol
I JUST LOVE IT!
and my highest......HIGHEST compliment to you Ms.

WISH I WROTE IT!!
pax
Anita

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on February 25, 2005

Dear Sherry,

With tears in my eyes and a lump in my throat, "forgive me, yes the absolute romantic as always" This is most certainly a keeper, stunning in every aspect...penned with perfection, grace, talent and "Sherry" elegant style.

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

Picture and verses complement one another to perfection, Sherry. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on February 17, 2005

Lovely, beautiful piece~`*

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on February 15, 2005

Beautiful poem and picture, Sherry!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on February 15, 2005

oh~~~~~~~~~``this is so sweet
and the perfect music!!
what a wonderful question and hope here
enjoyed this much

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on February 14, 2005

A keeper of ones to keep Sherry

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on February 14, 2005

Sherry, You know this is a Hallmark moment! Just absolutely stunning work.
Your gonna have to tell me your secret to write like that! Literally took my breath away my friend.
Thank you for sharing your amazing talents.
Oh! and Happy Valentines Day!

Lisa

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on February 14, 2005

Simply smashing!!!!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on February 14, 2005

Perfect!! Have just playfully suggested on Eileen's page that Valentine's is all about mystery and intrigue... on the other hand, it is also about wistful longing and heart-yearnings of the soul, which you have expressed magically for us here. The visual is captivating and distills your mood and ambience completely. This should be printed and tied with a bow in readiness to become the gift it already is to all of us who read it. TY Sherry, LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on February 14, 2005

Aww, the aching of lovelorn. Yet hoping it will be but for a short while.

Smacks home does this.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 13, 2005

an beautiful yet illusive valentine poem to that elusive fellow ...

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on February 13, 2005

You just know I love this......Stunning work! A+

Talent.....you have heaps of it.....ty, Dani

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on February 13, 2005

Now I really like the way you did this one.

Reviewed by George Jackson

Reviewed on February 13, 2005

Just beautiful.

Reviewed by Nila Jamier (Reader)

Reviewed on February 13, 2005

This is so gorgeous so well expressed love the art smiles:)

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on February 13, 2005

Wow, compared to this my Valentime "A Poet's Love" looks like a kindrgarden write, this is truly a beautiful piece of work, I love the mood this sets.

Well done Sherry,
HugsFelix

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on February 13, 2005

A precious beauty of a poem

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on February 13, 2005

Beautiful write!

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)

Reviewed on February 13, 2005

Very longing and a loving poem, Sherry. "Keeper of my heart" wow what metaphor!

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 13, 2005

Oh my Sherry! I'm stunned by the beauty of this gem! Outstanding in every way!Love the graphic, music,but the poem ,well you penned a
bit of perfection my friend!Totally superb!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on February 13, 2005

Exceptionally beautiful presentation and sooooo romantic. Loved this, Sherry.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 13, 2005

Awwwwwwww...this made me cry....and moved my emotions deep!!

"Oh, Keeper my heart
Tell me where can you be
Are you soaring the heavens
Perhaps adrift on the sea
Must I wait all my lifetimes
To be drunk in your bliss
Or will I find you tomorrow
In a Valentine�s kiss"

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Erica Ivory

Reviewed on February 13, 2005

Wow... This is so beautiful!! The picture is gorgeous but your words are what hits home. This one I will save to read again. Bravo!