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Becoming

Life is an experience
To be lived
Only by walking through
Fire
Can we begin to
Understand that
Life is an obstacle course
A testing ground
Where we get beaten
And battered
And molded into something
Livable
A work in progress
While becoming
A little stronger
More understanding
More compassionate.
We learn from
All our fellow creatures
Like worms and germs
And trees and bees
And baboons.
We develop our
Own inner beauty
From a sunset
A song
A poem.
Suffering teaches us
Humility.
Giving teaches us
The joy of
Receiving.
Tolerance builds
Strength
Forgiving builds
Character.
Learning to love
Shows us that
It is all
Worthwhile.



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 Reviews of "Becoming"
Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
Reviewed on November 20, 2014
Life is a work in progress, you are right. Great work

hug
Kathy

Reviewed by Mary Cochrane
Reviewed on November 17, 2014
All I can say is just Wow! Truly touched by this poem Edward. Kudos!
Mary

Reviewed by Isabella Koldras
Reviewed on November 16, 2014
...really brilliant...emotive...incredible poem Edward

...remarkable
how a human coming
liberates
opens up
to the common humanity
truly becoming a human
the truest expression of mind
that's only human
a state of being
enfolded
in mistakes
in weakness
in greed
in hope
in many things at the same time
in many reasons for being only human
That's it!
a man...an animal in this world to fear himself!
An evolution time
to take the next step from
human to kind
not to be afraid of being
human only
employ rational thoughts
for humankind
...becoming...
Ditto....if you're looking into living in harmony
with the Nature!
with the Worm!

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on November 16, 2014
I think we all battle our own personal demons, but that is neccesary to find our own inner beauty. there's a lot truth in this write.

Michael D.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on November 16, 2014
'Learning to love' ... absolutely. The heart and soul of living is loving; especially another. One of your best insights. Peace to you...

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 16, 2014
"We develop our
Own inner beauty"

quintessential ....

indeed, "learning to love" and remembering how to die ...

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on November 15, 2014
Are you saying I am a baboon...? But I will forgive you as you say it builds character, wait a minute, now you are saying I am a character...maybe I should just leave all this alone and go back to my picking of bugs out of my fur & keep swinging through the trees...-e-

Reviewed by Kathy Parenteau
Reviewed on November 15, 2014
Sometimes the journey is rough but when all is said and done it's always worth the trip! Wonderful poem Mr. Phillips.

Kathy J Parenteau

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 15, 2014
I surely do hope that, in the end, it will have been all worthwhile, Edward. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron
Reviewed on November 15, 2014
Thank you, Ed...I am going through my own personal kind of fire at the moment, and this is domething I needed to read.

Take care,

ChipB.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 15, 2014
I think I'll skip that "walking through fire" part. It can severely damage your skin and burn the only hair you've got right off your bod. As for the rest of the advice in this poem, it's almost evangelical.

Ron

Reviewed by lois christensen
Reviewed on November 15, 2014
Words all so true, been through it exactly like you say. it was all worthwhile too, and I became more compassionate. I really love this poem, Ed,

Reviewed by J. Roseline
Reviewed on November 15, 2014
Beautiful words, beautiful thoughts. It is catharsis to the soul. JK


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