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| Reviewed by Sandi Schraut |
1/30/2024 |
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| I liked this, a mystery and passion a great combo |
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| Reviewed by M Flack |
5/14/2021 |
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Passion is both dangerous and invigorating at the same time.
Well written 🦊 |
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| Reviewed by Jms Bell |
7/14/2018 |
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| EYES OF PASSION, FOR THE MOMENT, AT LEAST...ARE EXACTLY WHAT THEY PROFESS TO BE AND THEN, THEY ROAM AND FIZZLE OUT. BUT THOUGHTS OF THEM CERTAINLY MAKE GREAT POETRY, AS THIS SHARING IS. THANKS, WILLIAM. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATION |
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| Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain-Baello |
8/29/2017 |
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| The eyes speak a thousand words and your last line touched a thousand hearts. Lovely ! |
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
8/2/2017 |
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Oh, this is smooth and romantic! Your reflection seen in her eyes~~~~~~I like it!
Love ya!
Jane |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
7/31/2017 |
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I apologize for my error in submitting a poem into the short story section was not meant to mislead anyone ..... love peace to all
William |
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| Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia |
7/29/2017 |
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Delightful and profound!
Well done, D'Artagnan - there is nothing on earth to compare to a Warrior with passion!
Love & Blessings,
Rhonda |
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| Reviewed by John Herlihy |
7/28/2017 |
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| Thank God for passion, where would we be without this rarefied emotion. Nicely rendered. John |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
7/28/2017 |
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The eyes have it in this one. And passionate, that's for sure.
Still, I struggle when there is no question mark following a question.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
7/28/2017 |
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| "Passion." What in the heck would the world do without passion? |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
7/28/2017 |
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lovely
well done
m |
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| Reviewed by Eva Pasco |
7/28/2017 |
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| Your poem beautifully captures one of the manifestations of love, or at least, initial infatuation. |
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