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The Lost Estate
by E. Franklin Evans
Wednesday, February 24, 2010

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     Detective Mark Saunders has lost nearly all the things he loved: his wife, his parents, his Navy SEAL brother. And now, he seems to be losing his mind. His return to his hometown doesn't bring the rest he dearly desired and needed.

Glancing up from reading the address on the matchbook in his hand, the passenger noticed the cabbie was obviously uncomfortable being in that rundown, sleazy part of the city. Upon arrival,  the nervous driver raised a quizzical eye and said, "Ya sure that's the place you wanna go, Mac?"

He confirmed the pub's name and address on the door. "Yeah. I'm meeting a lovely lady there."

"OK, Mac, it's your funeral. I don't know of any ladies there; certainly no lovely ones."

Saunders paid the cabbie the exorbitant fee demanded for bringing him to this dimly lighted district. He stepped out of the cab and, as the driver stepped upon the accelerator, he cautiously walked to the door and entered.

Navy Lieutenant (jg) James "Jimbo" Saunders looked around the dimly lit pub. He had to squint to see the faces of the scraggly, unkempt men lining the faded oak bar and he was thankful he had decided not to wear his uniform. In this place it wouldn't take much for one of these characters to pick a fight. A man in uniform here would be an open invitation to a brawl.

Dark shadows made it difficult to discern any identifiable features on most of the late night patrons.  The jagged purple scars on some of the coarse faces seemed to shine as if daring someone, anyone to ask the owner how they got there.

Many of the hanging bare light bulbs had long been broken and, as long as the barkeep could see well enough to pour the rotgut and shortchange the blurry eyed drunken customers, there was no need to replace them. Thrown bottles and chairs would soon break them again anyway. Cracks in the large mirror behind the bar were covered with grimy tape breaking the reflection from the barroom into eerie disjointed scenes. If one looked closely in the mirror, you might be able to see the faded reclining nude wench that looked down on the room and observed the debauchery of the weary rum soaked regulars.

Years of grime and sour whiskey soaked aprons tied around the waist of the unshaven, potbellied barkeep added to the overwhelming stench of the waterfront bar. Never-ending slipshod wiping at the spilled drinks of cheap whiskey had worn the veneer of the wood to a dull luster stained with random dark circles.

Gouges and deep cuts in the bar top attested to the many bar fights over some imagined insult or jealously over one of the dirty and diseased wenches trying to encourage the most drunken of the patrons to accompany her upstairs. Or perhaps a careless pickpocket or cheater at cards who had been summarily dealt with by the quick blade pulled from the boot of an unsavory arbiter of tavern justice, accounted for the dark stains shown on the bar or the rough hewn wooden floor.  

Filthy sawdust strewn about the floor to keep the dust and mud at a tolerable state was stained with years of spilled whiskey, blood, urine, tobacco, and spit and did little to cover the worn plank flooring.

Why had Lissette asked him to meet her in this desolate hellhole? The name of the bawdy house betrayed its unsavory state. The Golden Peacock conveyed a vision of grandeur and refinement. Someone had a twisted sense of humor.  

 

 

 

 

 

 

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