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You are sweet every time we meet and this is sure neat as you sweep me off my feet.
Kind and so gentle as I surrender and you become tender.
Slowly running your fingers through my hair, as our lips softly connect and our eyes deeply stare there is such a sparkling glare.
Tongues began to tease as they soon will please and bring us to our knees.
Caressing as we undress with more tenderness we become fully undressed.
Hearts pounding as this is so charming.
Lying me down as my head starts to roll around as my body yearns for you.
Outside the rain begins to pour, as I am adored.
Suddenly pressing your body to mine firmly as we deeply stare into each other’s eyes the moment is now just right.
Holding each other tight, as I feel such delight by the candlelight.
A loving embrace, as bodies now work in motion with true devotion .
Moans begin to grow, as you first go slow and soon I start to glow.
Outside the rain begins to fall harder as you now work harder and I am completely lost in such pleasure.
Both becoming breathless and so restless in unspeakable ecstasy as we moved together in total harmony.
Suddenly thunder strikes loudly as bodies shook uncontrollably with uninhibited cries of satisfaction.
Lying cheek to cheek breathlessly this was heavenly as we soon smile with such glee.
I sure knew that he was truly the sweetest thing!
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
3/11/2011
Oh yeah, Laura Lee. Lovely and passionate; a sure cure for getting over the low times of this life/world. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Reviewed by karen logan
3/11/2011
very nice imagery. Great job Laura. love, karen