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Cliff and Marie Find Time to Talk About Sally (11)
by Gene Williamson
Wednesday, December 3, 2008

Rated "PG" by the Author.

       
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     Installment #11 in the Captain Jack Series.

 

Cliff is in his office when the phone rings. He picks it up and before he can say hello, Lew’s voice says, “Good morning, Cliff. I’ll only take a minute.” He laughs. “I only want to know how the blue pill worked.”

     “No complaints.”
    
     “How long does the pill last?”

     “Long enough. Don’t worry, I’ve got a jar full.”

     “What’s happening with young Jack?”

     “He's coming up next week for a meeting I arranged with a hotshot tv producer in town. Works at the area’s top station, WCIN-TV.”

     “Please keep me posted on Jack’s progress. I’ve checked around and learned that one of New York's major advertising agencies is looking to hire a young writer-producer.”

     “That sounds ideal.”

     “I wonder if the kid can act.

     “Why?”

     “Because I’ve got an “in” with the soap opera crowd, in case he gets desperate.”

     “It did well by you, right?”

     “I have no complaints. I know you’re busy, but keep me posted.”

     “You know I will.” Cliff hangs up the phone and tells his secretary that he’s going to lunch.”

He takes the elevator to the street level, and because the outside temperature is in the mid thirties, he walks briskly to the nearby City Plaza.
 
     Marie is waiting for him.

     “I have an appointment in a hour,” she says as she removes his tie.

     “You mean no chit chat first?”
 
     “If you want chit chat, call your wife.”

     “We only talk on holidays, and Christmas is still two weeks off.”

     “That reminds me, what are you giving me for Christmas?”

     “You’re holding it.”

     “Good, let me try it on for size.”

     “But first, remove the ribbon.”

     Marie laughs so hard she falls on the bed. Finally, she says, “Come to Sweetie. There’s not much time left.”

     Forty minutes later, the two of them shower together, get dressed, and take five minutes for coffee and a snifter of brandy.

     “Tell me Cliff, do you love me, or am I just a fad?”

     “I adore you.”

     “But do you love me?”

     “I think you’re the most beautiful woman I’ve ever known.”

     “But do you love me?”

     “I think about you all the time.”
    
     “But--”

     “Yes, dammit, I love you.”

     “Just need to be reassured.”

     “Finish your brandy and let’s go before you miss your appointment. Who with?”

     "The guys at the advertising agency are introducing Parker’s PartyPak at cocktail  parties on Valentine’s Day in five cities: Cincinnati, Pittsburgh,  Baltimore, Denver, and San Francisco.”

     “Cincinnati, Huh? Yes, I’m the hostess.”

     “Am I invited?"

     “What do you think? It was your idea.”

     “Will there be music?”

     “Yes.”

     “Will I get to dance with the hostess?”

     “Yes, but you’ll have to stand in line.”

     “I haven’t stood in a line since the army.”

     “Will I see you tonight?”

     “How about dinner?”

     “Good, you bring the wine and we’ll eat potluck.”

     “I’ll also bring steaks.”

     “In that case, pick up a veggie and a loaf of French bread.”

     “Anything else?”

     “Kiss me.”

     "If I do that you can forget the appointment.”

     “Oh, damn. Let’s go.”
 

Back in his office, Cliff hangs his coat and calls Sally to say that he won’t be home for dinner.
 
     “That’s ok, Dad. Judd and I can eat out. You working late again?”

     “No.”

     “That’s all you’re going to say?”

     “Yes.”

     “Well…enjoy.”

     “Thanks, Sally, you too. Say hi to Judd.”

     “And you say hi to whomever.”

     When Cliff hangs up the phone he wonders how much longer he can wait to introduce Sally to Marie. She knows he’s seeing someone, so he may as well get the two together. And soon. Maybe dinner. Maybe a show. Maybe New Year’s Eve at home, when Judd’s there to ease the tension. What the hell? Why should there be tension? They’ll like each
other. I think.
 

That night, over their steaks and baked potatoes, Cliff and Marie discuss the situation. Marie doesn’t see any problem. After all, he and his wife are separated. She’s probably seeing someone. Why shouldn’t he?

     “Explain that to Sally,” he says. “She thinks that her mother and father are going to  get together again.”

     “Well, are they?”

     “How do I know? It’s been twelve years since we’ve seen each other.”

     “Do you still love her? Or maybe I should ask, do you still want her?”

     “I don’t know, and I don’t know. Right now, the only woman I want is you.”
 
     "That's because I'm the only woman available." A coldness enters her voice. "What about later, when you see your sweet wife again?    
 
     “I guess I won’t know until I see her. And who says she's sweet?"”
 
     "You do every time you mention her name. It's that sweet way you say it."

     "Well, she is my wife, the mother of my daughter, and the first girl I ever loved."
 
     “That doesn’t sound very promising for me. I don't like playing substitute for your long-distance love. Perhaps I should start looking for another man.”

     Cliff stares at the beautiful woman seated across the table. “Maybe you should. You could find a strong, good-looking, younger man.”

     “Is that what you want me to do?”

     “Hell no.”

     “Then shut up and pour some more wine.”

     “Marie, I do love you. More than I thought possible."
 
     "You can't love two women with the same passion at the same time. Make up your mind, Cliff. Do you want her, the woman you haven't seen in twelve years, or do you want  good old dependable available me?

     "Marie, how could I possibly think of wanting another woman with you sitting there in that incredible negligee?”

     Marie taunts him by shaking the gown loose from one shoulder.

     “How do you expect me to finish my steak?”

     “I don’t.”

     Cliff pushes his plate aside, gets up, walks around the table, takes Marie in his arms, and heads for the bedroom.

     “Oh my,” says Marie. “Who says I need a younger, stronger man? Lover, you’re man enough for me. Where do you get all that stamina?”

     In a little blue pill
, Cliff wants to say. Instead, he says, “My morning Wheaties.”

     Cliff puts her down by the bed, slowly removes her negligee and surveys her with his eyes. “Marie, you’re so beautiful it hurts me to look at you.”

     “Then don’t look.”

     “I can’t help it. I want to devour you.”

     “Consider it dessert.” She loosens his robe, drops it to the floor, and pulls him onto the bed.

     The frenzy begins anew.
 

An hour or so later as they lie on the bed exhausted, Cliff says, “What are we going to do about Sally?”

     “Tell her.”

     “Tell her what?”

     “That you love me, Silly?  And, damn you, only me." 

     Cliff hesitates.  "Ok...when?”

     “At your place on New Year’s Eve when her guy is there, just as you mentioned earlier. Just tell her and then we’ll all hold hands and sing, Auld Lang Syne.”

     Cliff rolls over on Marie, kisses her nose, and says, “Did I ever tell you that you are the most beautiful woman I’ve ever known?”

     “Don’t you forget it.”

     This time the lovemaking is warmer and less frenetic as they tease and explore each other well into the night.
 

                                                         End

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks 4/16/2009
One correction/clarification:
“Cincinnati, Huh?" (Cliff speaking...then Marie replies...)

"Yes, I’m the hostess.”

Continuing to enjy this story (novel? :o)

Blessings and Love - Micke
Reviewed by Katie Gabrielle 12/7/2008
you keep the reader guessing!! there are suprises ahead! Keep up the great writing. one question. what is the Point of View of this chapter?
I think that there might be a little more arguing in this scene in real life and it depends whether the point of view is of the man or the woman. Keep up the great work!

Reviewed by Jon Willey 12/7/2008
slowly the mold is forming a new sense of mystery in the future of Captain Jack -- decisions of major consequence to Jack and Marie lie just ahead -- peace, love and continued writing prowess to you my dear friend -- JMW
Reviewed by Lloyd Lofthouse 12/4/2008
A suggestion or two: After Cliff says he doesn't know if he still loves his wife or not, Marie should be a bit frigid and Cliff has to work harder to warm her up. I've been married three times and had a few girlfriends in between and I've never met a woman that would take such words from a guy she's having sex with so easily without making him squirm.
Other than that, the scene moves fast and there are a lot of possibilities building. It seems to me that Lew and Cliff are doing a lot for young Jack without knowing him very well. I imagine that there is a ripe opportunity there for Jack to turn out to be a difficult person--maybe a narcissist that grew up during the self-esteem generation that doesn't even say thanks but takes everyone and everything for granted as if he is a living god and the world owes him since most from that generation act that way. One day they are seventeen and the next they see themselves as the next Bill Gates without any in-between. I taught enough idiots like that. Jack could turn out to be a real interesting character. Heck, Jack could even be an evangelical Christian that puts all his trust in God to get things done. Imagine a self-esteem kid that is also a narcissist being an evangelical Christian too? Boy, that would be a firecracker of a scene. I wonder if Cliff would throw him out a window.
Also, have you checked out the side effects of this little blue pill. There are some serious physical reactions for some people. See if you can find out and maybe make Cliff squirm a little more for his sex by feeling lousy.
Reviewed by J'nia Fowler 12/4/2008
Just a question or 2 as I am new to reading this story. Who are you writing for? Are you writing from the male perspective?
I think it is more than promising and a certainly a fun read.Kind regards J'nia
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 12/4/2008
Oh Gene your stories are something else, they sure get our attention. I love them, you best get them gathered for that book. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 12/4/2008
Oh, boy! I'm liking this A LOT! Can't wait to see what Sally has to say about all this!
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis 12/3/2008
My, my, my - very interesting!
Reviewed by Bonnie May 12/3/2008
Oh my we have something exciting coming up...I have a feelin Sally isn't going to be happy about the situation at all...cat fight???? Oh this is getting good. Love and hugs, Bonnie

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