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The view from my window
By Todd Cheney
Last edited: Sunday, March 14, 2004
This short story is rated "G" by the Author.
       
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This is what I see from my window...

The view from my window is cold. It could freeze me, take me along with it into the wind's icy howl. There are no leaves on the elms, nor the maples, nor the oaks. The street is wet, and cars pass on it, the same ones as before.


No one is here. Everyone is gone.


Sometimes the view from my window is of people laughing, falling drunken to the sidewalk. Childish games and yelling distract me, make me look out into the night. The orange-yellow glow of the streetlight never reveals the culprits.


I hear a gull call, or was it a crow? They are mistaken to be here. Winter is not over yet.


I can see dumpsters from my window; they are forest green with black plastic tops. Because of construction, they were moved from where they were before. A man goes by those dumpsters, and he looks through them. He puts stuff from them into the baskets on his three-wheeled bicycle. I feel sorry for him.


I see only one sign. It announces the name of the place where I live. It's lonely and needs friends. But I look closer and see some parking signs; they're too small.


I see a lot of cars, houses as well. None of the cars or houses are mine. I've only been in one of the houses I can see from my window. There's a bench; white lines of snow outline the boards attached to the metal frame. The bench is empty.


I could see the grass, but now I can't There was a blizzard earlier, and I was out in it.


The view from my window is cold. The only thing that keeps me from it: the heat of the radiator before me.


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Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on June 30, 2005
well done

Reviewed by Pier Tyler
Reviewed on November 20, 2004
Very detailed to the point where I can see what you see. I just don't like cold weather. Good writing, thanks for sharing it.

Reviewed by Robert Montesino
Reviewed on March 17, 2004
A well written descriptive piece of writing that takes your reader into your world to feel not only the cold that nature brings but also connecting us with the inner cold that being alone can manifest. Well done!

Reviewed by Judith Bailey
Reviewed on March 14, 2004
I would say the depression is from within, not without. The view from your window simply IS; having grown up in cold-wintered Montana, I remember looking out my window, seeing barren and cold, wishing it were sping with the freedom that brought.

My dad always said, "If wishes were horses, we'd all take a ride..."

I was in Chicago once, walking in a concrete forest of dilapidated buildings. The feeling was of hopelessness, empty. I hurried to get to my car, past the dinginess, but then I saw a bright yellow perky flower, strutting atop its green stem and spikey leaves. The lowly dandelion, but forever after, have thought of it as the Dandy Lion Who Roared Life IS... it changed my memory of that place.

Todd, I liked this piece... it will surely fit into something. Thanks for posting it.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 14, 2004
Actually, I liked this write very much, Todd. I do these once in awhile myself, just to practice observation techniques. But I like to balance cold dark observations, with sunny bright ones, and lots of nature writes.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 14, 2004
A cold, dark, lonely story, Todd...Hope you find warmth in future, either in friendships, or just a good bottle of kentucky bourbon...well thought out and put together, I liked this alot, Peace thru the Write, Ed & Rufuz