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Struggles of the Women Folk
by TM Brown
Wednesday, April 3, 2013

Rated "PG13" by the Author.

       
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     This is an excerpt of my next book, still in progress. I haven't quite decided on the final name of the book yet.

“Morning country bumpkins), she said, same as usual.
“I don’t know why you have to be so rude to us every morning! What makes you think you so much better than us! We workin in the same shop, doing the same stuff. Why you think you so much better than us”, I said as Miss Hazel and Sharon looked at me wide-eyed.
“Look at you! Need I say more”, Regina smirk...ed.
“No, you don’t need to say no more but I sure can. Like how you and Mr Anderson been breaking dem springs on dat bed upstairs almost every night.
"Shut up!"
“No, you shut up! I don’t want to hear nothing else outta you! Not one more mornin! You just common! Messing round with somebody else’s husband foe a few nice dresses. I know your kind.” I did’nt know why I was so mad at her but I just wanted to snap her head off.
“Shut up! That’s a lie”.
“No it ain’t. I hears yawl almost every other night”.
“You just sayin that cuz you jealous”
“Jealous! Jealous of what! You ain’t got nothing I want, that’ fo sho! You mean, and ya nasty and common on top of it!”
“You say one more word and I’ll..”
You’ll what? Girrl, you really don’t want no parts of me. You take one more step and that’ll be your last!

 

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Reviewed by Nina Norstrom, Author 5/6/2013
So far not bad. Guess, with some line-editing and/or copy-editing it will make for an interesting read.
Reviewed by Budd Nelson 4/3/2013
sounds cool
budd

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