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What Do You Think
by Keith V Wilson
Thursday, April 3, 2014

Rated "G" by the Author.

       


     I have had some people read this, and they can't figure it out. So it's your turn can you.

What Do You Think

By. Keith Wilson

     Today I shot a man. Just because he was there. What I did, was it wrong I don't know, and I don't care. The thing is, if I didn't someone else would have, so why not me. I have been wanting to do this for sometime now, and finally I got the chance, and this I wasn't going to pass up. So I guess your question is, why did I do it. Wwell i'll tell you.

     For years and years, people have been trying to get this guy, bucause he was into all kinds of stuff. Going all over the place, doing whateveer he wanted to. Not only women, but men flocked at his feet, knowing that they just needed the oppotunity to get him. I know I had to do something, so I kept a close watch on him, waiting for the right moment. Know that when I do this, the world would know, and they would come for me.

     His name is Eger, and he is a very demanding perso, everything has to be his way, he wants this and he wants that, and people just gives him what he wants. One afternoon I saw him in the courtyard. This is the first time I ever saw him alone. I wanted to shoot him then, but something told me not to, the moment just wasn't right. To many people around, and I just didn't need the audience, it would have to be in another setting, somewhere private. Maybe i'll try and get him back to my place, but I would have to do this without anyone knowing my plan.

     Now i'm back at my place, I have to figure out how to get Eger over here without him knowing what my plan is, need him to warm up to me. There are other people out there to get him too, but this has got to be done by me. I must do this, I want to do this, I have to do this. I have a plan to get him here, lets see if this works.

     I went down to the coffee shop. I know that Eger comes by ever so often. So I just thought I wait for awhile and see. I wasn't there to long before he came in, and order some coffe and bite to eat.

     Hey Eger, (I shouted), come on over have a seat, let's chat a bit if you have the time. Eger came over, and we sat and chatted for awhile. He told told me how things were going, hows he working so hard, and he was kind of tired. I told him he may need to rest a bit, take sometime off. I have just the thing, something you may like, if you can come by the house, i'm sure if will take your minds off of things for awhile. Eger said, sure how about around seven this evening. Seven would be just fine, I said.

     As we parted, I stepped off to the restroom before heading home. On the way out I saw Eger and Tom chatting. Tom, a person I have seen around a few times before. I don't really know a lot about him. But I know this, I have to keep him from Eger right now. They seem to look like they have known eachother for awhile, I wonder what they are talking about. Ok I need to keep my cool, can't lose focus. So as I walked out, I looked their way and nodded to them as I left. Eger said,(see you at seven), And I waved as I walked out.

     Once outside, I stood there for a minute, something was telling me the that Tom was getting in the way. I can't let this happen, I have to do something. I found the car that Tom was driving, and I thought what I was about to do is wrong, but I need to do this. so I leet the air out of all four tires,I know that was a bit much, but one can't be to sure, can one.

     Around six-forrty five, Eger rang the door bell. Hey buddy come on in, I said. (i'm a bit early), he said. No timimg is good, just throw some food on the grill. What can I get you to drink, i know you had a long day. Eger said, I thought I would have been a little late getting here, I was supposed to meet the guy I was talking to at the shop this afternoon. But he called me and told me that after he left the coffee shop, someone had flatten all four of his tires. Really, I said. He dosen't have a clue how or way anyone would do that. It just seemed kind of odd. But anyway i'm here. So what was it you wanted to show me. I told him I have this really nice 1947 chevy I have been working on in my work shop, and thought you would love it.

     We out to my shop, and I let Eger in first, and when his eyes came upon this vintage car that I was restoring from beginning to end. He walked over to it, and rubbed his hands over it, and I knew it was time. I was standing in the doorway, listening to Eger talk about the car, with thisvery pleasant look on his face. I said Eger, and he turned to look at me, and I did it, I shot him. Over and over again, I shot him. I have done what I have set out to do. And now I will be famous. I have what others have set out to do, but I did it. Today I shot a man, I hope these pictures come out good.

     What do you think?

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Reviewed by Kiara Wilson 4/5/2025
I think this is bullshit because this author is and was my father and comes to find out that I actually have ALL OF HIS WRITINGS ANF THIS ISNT ONE OF THRM. AND MY DAD IS ALSO A TRUTHFUL MAN. HE WASNT A TEACHER NRVER HAS BEEN. STATEMENT ISNT TRUE AND THE ONLY THING HR EVER PUBLISHED WAS "WALKING". I HSVE THE ORIGINAL FRAMED. OH AND NEEDLESS TO SAY MS DEBORAH NEVER MENTIONED THIS SIGHT TO ME AND HE WOULD NEVER KEEP HER NAME CONFIDENTIAL, He always gives props and credit to where they are due.
Reviewed by E Phillips 5/18/2014
I suppose the answer lies in the quality of your camera, your skill in taking pictures, the lighting, and a few other variables. But I am searching for the plot to your story, or at least your reason for writing it...
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 4/4/2014
I think you're paparazzi and, because he is famous, you'll get a lot of money for the pictures. He sure seems to be an easy mark when you can call him over and getting to come over to your house just by asking.

Make sure you have the piece edited before you send it off anywhere to get it published.

Ron
Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel) 4/3/2014
Aaaahhhh!!! Thanks for your message in clarifying this. Oh, yes!! You shot him!! Heeeheee!!!!

Sandie

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