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Books
· The American Poet Who Went Home Again (Kindle eBook)

· Songbirds and Roses (paperback edition)

· Songbirds and Roses (Kindle eBook edition)

· Greeting Flannery O’Connor at the Back Door of My Mind (Kindle edition)

· Democratic Dilemmas and Divine Inspiration (A Kindle Short)

· Savannah: Brokers, Bankers, and Bay Lane (edited by Aberjhani)

· Savannah, Immortal City (Civil War Savannah, edited by Aberjhani)

· Suzanne Jackson Five Decades

· These Black and Blue Red Zone Days

· 2nd Edition Encyclopedia of the Harlem Renaissance (eBook)


Short Stories
· Holiday Tale: A Brazilian Thanksgiving in Savannah

· Come Walk With Me

· Uncut Goodies Part 4: the Current Conclusion

· Uncut Goodies Part 3

· Uncut Goodies Part 2

· Uncut Goodies Part 1

· Astonishing Tale of the Goddess and the Skylark: Part 4 of 4

· Astonishing Tale of the Goddess and the Skylark: Part 3 of 4

· Astonishing Tale of the Goddess and the Skylark: Part 2 of 4

· Astonishing Tale of the Goddess and the Skylark: Part 1 of 4


Articles
· Recalling the Unforgettable 25 Years Later

· Democracy and Dinosaurs down by the Riverside (part 1 of 3): Culture

· Poetry and All that America250 Thelonious Monk Jazz

· Mining The Past For Hope and Motivation in The Present

· Malcolm X in a Time Such as This

· Celebrating National Poetry Month

· Dear Friends of Humanity

· Political Maybes vs. Emerging Realities

· Author Octavia E. Butler and The Fire This Time

· Conversations with the World 111: Speaking Truth to Power


Poetry
· Sunday Afternoon and the Jazz-Angel Cometh 2025

· Rainbow-Song 2025 (Part 3)

· A Fever-Cooked Dream

· Her Woman's-Body Aesthetics

· A Song of Toni Morrison My Soul Now Sings

· Seasons of Compassion Mindfully Considered

· Reflections on Ode to the Good Black Boots that Served My Soul So Well

· How Poets and Words Burn Truth into Love

· Valentine Winter: A Mink-Warm Distance Between Decades

· The Poetess Inside Her Years

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News
· Author Pens Tribute to Legendary Savannah Educator and Advocate

· Author-Artist Launches New American Angels Series

· Savannah Author Explores Mysteries of Creative Metaphysics in New Release

· Observing Local Author Day in Savannah-GA

· New Media Interview in Bold Journey Magazine

· New Interview in CanvasRebel Magazine

· In Honor of 500K US Citizens Killed by COVID-19 Pandemic

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Introducing Bonus Story Tracks
By Aberjhani
Last edited: Sunday, February 14, 2016
This short story is rated "PG13" by the Author.
       
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· Holiday Tale: A Brazilian Thanksgiving in Savannah
· Uncut Goodies Part 2
· Uncut Goodies Part 3
· The Whips and Hammers of Memory Unkind
· Uncut Goodies Part 4: the Current Conclusion
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Secrets and jewels from the editors' lounge.

(Original cover art for Songs from the Black Skylark zPed Music Player from the painting "Christ Listening to Stereo" by Luther E. Vann)


Some Hollywood directors are famous for the “ruthless” manner in which they cut precious scenes from a given film, and many music producers have similar reputations for what they will or will not allow on a final recording project. What both have in common is the wisdom to save their deleted jewels and present them within a context or package––think “Director’s Cut” or “Extended Song Versions”––separate from the star project and yet completely viable in its own right. Editors and writers do something similar and my Uncut Goodies series falls in the tradition of salvaging lost scenes from the cutting room floor.

 

To cut or not to cut a given word or passage from a manuscript has long been one of the battles that sometimes divided brilliant editors and just as brilliant writers. It might surprise many readers to learn the issue is not always one regarding semantics, syntax, or ego. Often it has been about the number of dollars (or pounds or yen or marks) it took produce a book of––say 300 pages versus 1,400 pages.   

 

I didn’t think my book The Black Skylark zPed Music Player (formerly known as Christmas When Music Almost Killed the World) needed to lose any weight when one of the early editors for a proposed publisher requested I drop an agonizing number of words. I nevertheless acquiesced in the spirit of combining expertise, exercised admirable editorial tough love toward myself, and got the novel down to its current sleek yet voluptuous figure.  I had to admit that doing so made the book, which by its nature is not your typical linear structured novel, a tighter faster-moving read. Yet I also had to mourn the loss of huge chunks. Some of those chunks might hold certain keys for some readers. Other readers might disagree but still enjoy the backdrop provided by Uncut Goodies, which in fact include the original first two chapters.

 

The series is now known as Bonus Story Tracks. Each story makes an entertaining supplement to the novel and/or provides very enjoyable read on its own.  

 

Aberjhani 

   

 

 


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Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on November 19, 2007
like all other hopelessly devoted fans of your writings i will be here
peace

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on November 14, 2007
Always look forward to reading anything you write...a keeper for sure!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 13, 2007
very exciting!! i look forward to them

Reviewed on November 13, 2007
Aberjhani,

I, too, look forward to your Uncut Goodies. Not one of your words should be cut. Each is special to the next to the next to the...well, you get the idea. :)

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on November 13, 2007
Excellent write, Aberjhani; nice to read you again! Very well penned!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)