Sandie, the ending was sad! I felt so bad for our herione. You did a good job tapping into emotion with the story. If anything, I might suggest a light copyedit. For example, the word "him" is missing in the following: "I met at church." You did a good job with the short story format.
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I met Jerome on a busy city street in Baltimore, Maryland, when he was forty-five years old. On that particular day, I was out and about, enjoying a much-needed day off from work.
I wanted to purchase a sukiyaki sub. I parked my car in an area of
