Desire (erotic) (poem) by Sandra A. Mushi on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by digs carter (Reader)

Reviewed on July 31, 2010

y i cant read it?

Reviewed by Unique Rob (Reader)

Reviewed on November 5, 2008

I cant read it. nothing in coming up, i wish i could though :(

Reviewed on January 1, 2007

oh my! I am not sure how I may have missed this delightful and well written piece of erotica but I am glad I found it on tonights ramble! Outstanding work, lady poet!

Reviewed by Ingrid Khola (Reader)

Reviewed on May 9, 2006

LOL! Snap back to reality! Excellent twist! Brilliant.
u rock Sista

Reviewed by sany jackson (Reader)

Reviewed on November 1, 2005

I couldn't work with someone that desirable. great write!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on August 21, 2005

Not sure whether I'd be able to work with these thoughts on my mind....
Excellent write.
Amira.

Reviewed by David Knight

Reviewed on July 28, 2005

Some men just don't know the effect they have on the gentle sex.

I do and unfortunately it doesn't match your well crafted words ;)

David

Reviewed by Masood Lohar

Reviewed on July 7, 2005

You know how to keep reader speel-bound and wildly guessing... it is indeed a beautiful write...
Masood

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on July 2, 2005

The twist, again. Nice thoughts, though. Wish all women had those thoughts. Or do they?

Ron

Reviewed by Leysa Lowery

Reviewed on July 1, 2005

So glad you mentioned this to me ... very HOT write! Loved the ending. *sigh* Imagination is a great thing ...

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 7, 2005

hot, hot, HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yes, most enjoyable...excuse me whilst I open the window! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. *whew* it's HOT in herre!

Reviewed by Robin Spicer

Reviewed on June 6, 2005

Fantasy?

A freind once told me that fantasy was good for the soul. We meet nicer people in our dreams.
A very descriptive and sensual write. Most enjoyable.

Robin

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on May 28, 2005

Very intense and passionate
Peter

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 28, 2005

Very expressive. Love it. Thank you, Sandie. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Ricardo Titang (Reader)

Reviewed on May 25, 2005

Hmmmm ... what a reminder indeed. Nutting but explicit and candid literature. Totally immersed in reality. U've always been da bomb...once again !!!

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on May 23, 2005

She's a dedicated writer I'd say
A splendid piece

Joy and starlight
HH

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2005

Gotta love it. A future AD star. Yep.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on May 23, 2005

Well, hello!! It's great to meet such a free-spirit and accomplished artist... but, hang on a minute... I feel like I know you intimately already!! Seriously, loved what I have scanned of your Bio so far, Sandra, and this is a great introduction to some of your work... like you, I have now got to set to and write something worthwhile instead of daydream... but, after this, all I can do is to butt my head against my desk! This is just too much for the start of my Monday morning... but stirring and inspirational to say the least! Welcome to The Den! LOL Kate x

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 22, 2005

ah, the heart of a poet surmounts all ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 22, 2005

Oh my, too real oh yeah...got me stuttering;-)
great write!...turning the ac on

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 22, 2005

Par excellence!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on May 22, 2005

Hot sizzling write! Girl do you dream!