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| Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald |
10/14/2008 |
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A truly wonderful write. So much passion and loved the twist at the end.
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
10/9/2007 |
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2004! and this touched DEEPLY, what a sensual journey you lusciously took us on Belle!
Thank you for opening up your chambers this Halloween Eve! for us to love and perceive~
The Full Moon is where our creativity comes from, is my SURE opinion~!
Love your heart and mind my friend!
Warm love and Warmer hugs, Warrior Goddess Purple Sheeeoox
STay Positive! HAPPY and STrong! |
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| Reviewed by Walt Hardester |
10/9/2007 |
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A tale interwoven with reality and eunearthly fantasy, from the pen of a master st such things.
Walt |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
10/9/2007 |
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My fireplace was cold and dark, but you came and lighted a roaring fire in it...thanks and...to the next full moon.
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Ann Scarborough |
10/8/2007 |
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Oh Sissy, this is wonderful! Truly wonderful!!!
Annie |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
10/8/2007 |
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Well well La Belle this echoes with the lovely ghosts of the deep South. As Halloween approaches this write is defiantely right on target, with just enough doses of eeriness, sensuality, and romance this one is definately a ten out of ten.
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Fee |
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| Reviewed by Charles Keller |
10/8/2007 |
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| Another glimpse into your incredibly sensual, amazing talent. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
10/8/2007 |
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Wow, this is an effectively penned invitation! Well done, La Belle, I need a cold chower!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
10/8/2007 |
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Belle,
This was a very sensual story, I want to take a hot bath now, and see what happens...lol.
Very amazing visuals and you took me right into your bath chambers. I love this!
Way to go, continue please...
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
10/8/2007 |
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Excellent tale, perfect for the Hallowe'en season! Very well done, Belle; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Charles O'Connor III |
10/8/2007 |
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The perspective on which you formed this tale is very good and your details are nicely put. This tale is obviously romantic with a little bit of horror. And you added in a few surprises such as the blood on his hands. Nicely done.
Take a look at my new story, pay no attention to grammar because it is unedited, "An Occurrence One Evening" it is a story for my new anthology. Tell me what you think be it good or bad.
I loved your story and hope to read more,
Charles D. O'Connor III |
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| Reviewed by Lewis Findley |
10/8/2007 |
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| Know who that sound like Hun? Sound like your old man. [Cheatin N Hog huntin with ole Ted Nugent aint what its cracked up to be now is it?] ;) |
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