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The Dream: The Great War Part II Revisited
by Joshua D Cronk
Monday, June 23, 2008

Rated "PG13" by the Author.

       
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     Part II of the series.
*REVISITED*

            When the general woke up he smelt smoke coming from some where inside of the base. He got out of bed and ran out of his room.

 

“Where is the gua…r…d?” He looked down and saw the guards’ corpse laying there with two arrows stuck in his head. He pulled one of the arrows out and looked at them.

 

“Eleven made, I should have know!” He ran down the hall way only to see fire eating up the mess hall and destroying everything. He turned around and ran the other way hoping that there was a rout leading out of this place. He kept on running until he spotted a dead body on the floor. IT WAS LAOS!!

 

“Laos, Laos! Are you alive!! Speak to me!!!”

 

“Captain….is that you…”

 

“Yes Laos it’s me, come on get up lets get you out of here.”

 

“No…leave me here… I failed you in ….combat... I don’t deserve your pity….”

 

“No Laos, don’t say that, you fought greatly. You will be ok… no… please...” He looked at Laos’s wounds and saw that he had an arrow in his chest, right below the heart.

 

“How…how bad is it?” Junh looked straight at Laos, looked him in the eyes.

 

“Remember when it was me laying there on the floor?” Laos looked up at him.

 

“Hehe, yeah…I remember.”  

  

“Well it’s about that bad….”

 

            Laos looked away and said nothing, but Junh knew that he knew that he was going to die.

 

“Well come on now.” Junh picked up Laos and started to drag him towards the door way. As he was walking the door burst opened. It was the Imperials!

 

“What the hell are you doing here?” Junh was very angry now, first those damn Elves and now this filthy scum!

 

“Has my base become a club for fungus!!?”

 

“Very funny, we were just here because we saw the Elves destroy your base and we came over to see how badly beaten you guys are!!” The officer had a wide smile on his face, a smile that could only belong to the devil him self.

 

“GET OUT OF HERE! We don’t need your help!”

 

“Help, who said anything about help, were not here to help. I’m just here to see you die.” Junh laid Laos down gently and drew his sword.

 

“Oh a fight I see, you against a whole squad! Let’s see that’s 1…2… oh 15 to 1.” The whole squad broke up in laughter after the comment was made.

 

“We’ll see who is laughing in a second!!!” He jumped at the Officer and positions his sword in a way to slice the Officers head off, but out of nowhere a man shot him in the side with a rifle. He fell to the ground with a loud thud and grabbed his wound, the blood seep through his fingers onto the hard stone floor.

 

“Well, well, well. It looks like the mighty Junh has been shot down.” The officer kicked Junh and made him flinch. He laid there in pain, and tried to get up. Laos then motioned him to stay down.

 

“But wait…Laos…your wound is worst then mine.”

 

“I’m fine, don’t you get up from that spot.”

 

“Oh! Look the scary little boy is going to kill me what will I do!” The soldiers want up into a roar of laughter.

 

“You…you…filthy scum, you shawl pay for what you have done with your blood!!” He grabbed Junh’s sword and charge for the officer at full force.

 

“Oh, I’m so scared!” He got in his ready stance and drew out his sword. Laos jumped at the Officer and swung his sword, he swung it so hard the Officers sword broke and he looked Laos right in the eye. ‘Why Laos you could have been a great Imperial, just like your mom.’

 

 “What, what was that get out of my HEAD!!?”

 

‘No Laos you know that no matter what the Imperials will always win!’

 

“No, no they want! I will make sure of that!” Laos found himself on the ground curled up into a little ball, screaming, screaming with such rage he couldn’t tell if it was him or not.

 

“Now what, is the little baby sacred of the big man! Wah wah wah!!”

 

“AHHHHHH! Get out of my HEAD!!”

 

‘You no you can’t beat them, there to strong for you.’

 

“Get OUT OF MY HEAD!!!” Laos got back up on to his feet and lunged him self at the Officer, this time with it pointing at his head.

 

“What! What are you doing!!?” The Officer ran, but it was too late. Laos had all ready sliced off his head. As the blood sprayed, and the body feel, the other soldiers ran for it and didn’t come back, Laos laid there trying to get Junh onto his shoulders but fell to the ground and didn’t get back up.

  

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