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Who U Talkin' 2?
by Anne Marie La Porte
Monday, February 16, 2009

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     This is a short story written in the form of a chat room dialogue. I hope you enjoy as it is experimental. I did try to keep the netspeak to a minimum however I did try to work it in as a plot device. :)

*USER EM1LY has entered chat

EM1LY: Hey *smile* You there Mercy Bucketz??

BIG RED: hey M *smile*

EM1LY: Who are you?

BIG RED: Smee MERCY *smile*

EM1LY: Whats with the handle?  *confused*

BIG RED: u don't like? Iz gettin bored wit da same old, u no?

BIG RED: so?

EM1LY: So? what?

BIG RED: wot u mean wot?

BIG RED: U asked him out yet?

EM1LY: *blush*

BIG RED: Grrrr!!!!!

EM1LY: I Know. I want to but ...

BIG RED: But wot? U lyk him right?

EM1lY: yeah

BIG RED: Practice on me

BIG RED: Pretend Im him

BIG RED: tel me how I make u feel.

EM1LY: ok

EM1LY: I like you *smile*

BIG RED: BORING!!!!!!!!!!

EM1LY: WHAT? *shock*

BIG RED: u tell him dat he'll think u lyk him as a friend.

BIG RED: U lyk him mor than a friend right?

EM1LY: *blush*

BIG RED: Try agin

BIG RED: Dis tym put sum luv in2 it *smile*

EM1LY: Why are you typing like that?

BIG RED: Wot u mean?

EM1LY: Normally you don't use to much net speak.

BIG RED: Just trying it out *laughing*

BIG RED: Okay so tell me what you would say to him ...

EM1LY: I really like you?

BIG RED: GRRRRRR!!!!!!!

BIG RED: When you see him what is the first thing that you think of?

EM1LY: I smile because he makes me feel good about myself, you know? When he talks with me, I don't get the feeling that he sees me as some kid who is taking a class with him.

BIG RED: U tink dat??

EM1LY: ?

BIG RED: umm you don't think he looks down on you right?

EM1LY: No. I told you that before remember? Whats with you today?

BIG RED: Nothing LOL

BIG RED: I have an idea!!!!

EM1LY: What?

BIG RED: Don't ask him out on a date.

EM1LY: WHAT!?!  *shock*

BIG RED: Just ask him to hang out sometime. Just tell him you like to hangout with him. He talks with you a lot in class right? He wouldn't if he wasn't interested.

BIG RED: TRUST ME! *grin*

BIG RED: Just tell him that you like hanging out with him and would like to know if he would like to hang out somewhere other than class.

EM1LY: You think that he'll say yes?

BIG RED: *grin*

BIG RED: Trust me *wink*

BIG RED: BRB

EM1LY: *smile*

*USER Mercy_BUCKETS has entered chat


MERCY_BUCKETS: Hey are you there Em?

EM1LY: Mercy?

MERCY_BUCKETS: Yeah. Sorry I'm late

EM1LY: Why did you change your nick?

MERCY-BUCKETS: I always use Mercy_Buckets *confused*

EM1LY: No you were just chatting as Big Red.

MERCY-BUCKETS: Big Red? Why would I use that nick? I just got home like 5 minutes ago.

EM1LY: You JUST got home?

MERCY_BUCKETS: Yeah

EM1LY: Than who was I just chatting with?

EM1LY: Big Red was encouraging me to ask "W" out.

MERCY_BUCKETS: What? Really?

MERCY_BUCKETS: Wait BIg Red???

EM1LY: Yeah

MERCY_BUCKETS: hmmmmmm whats "W"'s last name

EM1LY: Bridge why?

MERCY_BUCKETS: Rearrange the letters in Bridge and you get Big Red *SHOCK*

*EM1LY dies of embarrassment*

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Reviewed by Anne Marie La Porte 2/17/2009
Thank you for reviewing my work :)

This one of many that I have written that may or may not end up in a larger work. There are two companion pieces to this short story posted here - "Lost and Found" and "The outing of Emily" I have several other "William and Emily" stories that I am working on as well :)
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 2/17/2009
An interesting account of the dangers of chat... ...it happens quite often. Thank you for sharing Anne Marie. Write on and best wishes to you,

Regis

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