New novel jacket blurb first draft

Hi everyone

Below is a draft copy of the jacket blurb for my second novel Saving Paludis. I would be pleased to get some feedback - too short? better words? better structure? etc. With thanks, Graham C.

On a planet far from Earth rebellion is underway.

The natives, subdued by military action in the distant past, occupy a reserve on the North East peninsula. They have been plotting revenge for hundreds of years.

The human inhabitants, spurred by a failing economy, plot their own course. A new technology that can dramatically change the way mankind explores the universe promises salvation. The mother planet, however, does not agree, especially when several savage attacks on Earth appear to emanate from Paludis.

Agent Stefan Lattanzis, botanist Clare Cavanna and several renegade aliens battle to save Paludis. Everything is against them.

But every once in a while in the universe there is born a great leader, a messiah, who can change the fortunes of an entire planet …