Being near you
is like
bathing in sunlight
after a long winter snow storm.
like the sweet smell
of jasmine
after a spring shower
like a baby’s smile
at the sound
of his mother’s voice
like the clear notes
of an angel’s song
because being near you
is my
completion.
Oh, I like this, Bobbi. Completion is that baby's smiles at the sound of his mother's voice.. completion is... such wonderful thoughts here. So touching.... thank you for sharing...
In Spirit,
Bear
Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
Reviewed on October 26, 2003
Super tribute, distillation and overall well written piece.
Flows so well!
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Marlene
In Spirit,
Bear
Flows so well!
Love Tinka!
to my face as I finished reading.
Tender poem.
Brava to you!
Thank You,
Teresa Emilie
You manage to successfully use similes "like..." where most poets singularly fail.
Very thoughtful poem.
Richard Vallance
Carmen