I Want To Lay With You Forever (poem) by Roger A. Ochs on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on May 4, 2005

Our personal histories lead us to present choices.........
very romantic and touching :)

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on March 30, 2005

perfect!

Vesna:)

Reviewed on December 30, 2002

Oh! Roger this is so romantic.......I can smell the love and the flowers .....imagination can take you many places....just loved this one
Happy new year to you Roger
Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Sherry Gibson

Reviewed on December 26, 2002

Your words captured the true essence of love! Beautiful

Sherry G

Reviewed by Alexandria

Reviewed on December 12, 2002

Roger,This was a wonderful passionate writing, is it new, and who inspired you. She is lucky! Alex

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on December 7, 2002

Extremely passionate and well said for the one you love. Fantastic write.

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on December 7, 2002

So beautifully filled with the heart of the poet!

Reviewed by Eva T,

Reviewed on December 6, 2002

My dearest darling.. sigh.. you have honored me yet again with your beautiful mind.. your wondrous words.. your poetic passion! They dont know of us.. but they will.. I cannot wait to share US with all our dear friends here in the den.. Thank you, my love. xoxox

Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader)

Reviewed on December 6, 2002

to make oneself vulnerable enough to surrender...to want to surrender...the quintessential element to ecstasy...lovely.**Mari**

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)

Reviewed on December 6, 2002

Robert you said it all
I let this move all through me as i read it
such beauty
I really love this

Reviewed by Sally Montoye (Reader)

Reviewed on December 6, 2002

So beautiful!!!
Giving in completely to LOVE!

Reviewed by Sally Montoye (Reader)

Reviewed on December 6, 2002

Beautiful! :)

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci

Reviewed on December 6, 2002

Roger,
This is a heart grabber, beautiful in every way! I read this a couple times!

"I've lain in
Fields of
Purple clover"

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen

Reviewed on December 5, 2002

roger that
josie

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on December 5, 2002

Roger this is an excellent poem. Loved it!
Bill Murray

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on December 5, 2002

This is wonderful, I'd love to read this from someone I was romantically involved with...Gorgeous wrote...

Reviewed by Chester Hardy lll

Reviewed on December 5, 2002

Truly real romance, Roger

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on December 5, 2002

nothing better...

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on December 5, 2002

Roger, This is one of the many great poems you have written. Top Ten.

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)

Reviewed on December 5, 2002

Total surrender to love. Beautifully romantic.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on December 5, 2002

Mmmm, this is a great love poem, just magical, Roger, sure to touch your lady's heart.

Reviewed by Madame X (Reader)

Reviewed on December 5, 2002

Wow! This was fantastic!! 10+++

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on December 5, 2002

Awwwwwwwwww, you are so sweet......I bet she's going *sigh* ;) hehehe Ty, Dani

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on December 5, 2002

sigh... I am captivated. Can you keep a secret? (smile). sigh... katy.

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie

Reviewed on December 5, 2002

Clapping.... Bravo!!! I think you found the right words.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on December 5, 2002

Roger, this is worded so beautifully. I could feel the passionate honesty. so very lovely

Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)

Reviewed on December 5, 2002

Great Roger, I'm glad you found it.
Wonderful passion felt here.